No matter how deeply we once loved, or how much we went through, we can't escape this fate...
I have always been the one you defeated, in business and in love.
I can't blame you, and I can't hate you. Your ambitions, your plans, were already underway...
All I can do is exile myself. No hate, no resentment, no love. Just drifting, completely alone.
Maybe ours really was just a doomed relationship, repeating itself over and over.
But I'm tired...
So let me be the one to end it with my own hands...
So you, Dongfang Yu, have nothing more to do with me, Ning Feng.
I looked at him and smiled. “After all these years, what has changed between us?”
He said nothing, only gazed at me with a deep, complicated look, his emotions surging beneath the surface.
“When you needed me, I wasn't by your side. But this time, I won't miss my chance again, even if I'm not the one you most want beside you.”
After all those twists and turns, in the end, you're the only one by my side...
She spoke, her voice heavy with sorrow. “He's dying...”
I said nothing, looking at the trees in late autumn. Winter was coming...
“He really is dying... Please! Go back and see him! You're all he has...”
“If he dies, you'll never be happy for the rest of your life, will you?” He gently held me, letting out a deep sigh.
I couldn't stop my eyes from filling with tears.
So many times, I've watched you walk away without looking back.
But this time, I know I may really have lost you, forever...
You left so decisively, so resolutely.
Suddenly, I felt as if the whole world had abandoned me...
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This work is very interesting. At first I thought it would be unbearably sadistic, so I never dared to read it. One night I was really bored, so I started reading it from the middle. Unexpectedly, I became addicted while watching it, and got out of hand. Later I found the front and started watching it from the beginning. After staying up for two nights, I finally finished the whole work. After reading the work, the emotional description is very good and the inner description is also very rich. However, I still feel that Sevis is a little pitiful and sympathetic. I like several endings, whether they are sad or happy, whether it is with Sevis or with Dongfang Yu. However, some of the extra chapters were locked and I did not see it. I am a little regretful, but I am still very satisfied. It seems that the author started writing this story in 2007, and finally wrote it in 2009. It must have taken a lot of effort to write four parts, but I still want to read the first part, because there is an introduction at the end of the third part. I don't know how Dongfang Yu and Ning Feng progressed in the first part. It should be said that Dongfang Yu abused Ning Feng's heart, but from the beginning to the end of the article, I felt that the two were abusing each other, and sometimes Ning Feng even abused Dongfang Yu more.
Of course, as a reader, I still prefer to think from the perspective of the recipient, so even if Dongfang Yu is abused, he deserves it. On the contrary, Ning Feng is abused and will feel sorry for him.
However, I also want to know what happened to Wen Mo and Dongfang Yu? How Wen Mo and Lian XX viewed Ning Feng at the beginning. Although three years have passed, how did the several aristocratic young masters interact with Ning Feng. Three years later, it seems that although Ning Feng has seen everything clearly, he will still be angry at Wen Mo and others. This makes people laugh, and there is a slight psychological imbalance.
Of course, I don't know if I didn't read it all, or if I wrote something else. I searched online, but couldn't find it. I don't know if the author will write more in the future, but I'm still looking forward to it. This work is very good, and the writing style is also very vivid. In particular, Xiao Shou is not written as the kind of fool who can be exploited by others. He has his own unique He has independent thoughts and an independent character. Even when he was wronged, he still maintained his arrogance. Although he still couldn't defeat Xiao Gong's pursuit in the end, it was still the kind of article that made people feel good after reading it. I hope the author can write more good articles like this for readers to enjoy~~~The author's reply:
Haha~ Touch~ Thank you for liking~o(∩_∩)o..., The span is indeed a bit long... Sigh, mainly because I wrote more in the second half of 2008, otherwise it might really be delayed until 2009... But now those extra chapters and the first part will definitely be completed in 2009... ORZ, yes After finishing the new article, I will start writing the follow-up and the first part again... Mo, I'm sorry... Jinjiang Shangye's column is currently the most complete~ Wen Mo and the Lian brothers also had stories when it was originally set. Maybe I will write about them in the future... Thank you again~~hug~
I specially registered in Jinjiang for the night review~
It felt a little inconsistent that they were back together like that in the end! ! !
The rift between them still exists, and Hua Ya's matter is still unresolved. Although I understand the depth of their love for each other, at the same time, the use of each other's ties cannot be ignored... It feels like the two of them are still together with grudges. It is not a HE in the true sense, but it seems that the ending of Yan Fenfei's version is more reasonable and natural development! Anyway, when I saw the end, I suddenly had this thought in my mind: "How can we just be together like this?~!!! How can we just forgive so easily (it doesn't seem to be called forgiveness...)?!!!"
Overall, the writing is still very good! The first two parts are more fascinating~ (Maybe because the first part is so exciting, the second one is relatively inferior in comparison...) It's wonderful~ Looking forward to more completed works~~! (Don't jump into the pit easily and never get over it~)
After reading 70% of the four parts of this novel, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I read the ending.
Before I read it, I was still thinking why this article is so long. I really can't understand it.
And now I finally understand
From the vague expectation at the beginning (the beginning is really attractive to me, it is my cup of tea), then attracted by the plot, and finally slowly becoming impatient.
I have to say, this article is a bit like a foot wrap, and the abuse is really inexplicable.
I don't know if the author was inaccurate about the length and grasp of the content.
The psychological activity of this Shou is really unparalleled. He can actually do this over and over again. After being touched for a few hours, he starts to be suspicious and dissatisfied after dozens of hours, and needs Dongfang to coax him. Then after he feels relieved, he keeps asking in his mind: Does he love me or not? Why hasn't he contacted me for so long? And this state is like this from the whole article to 70% of the part. The psychological description is too detailed, so detailed that it makes me feel collapsed, because no matter how much Dongfang coaxes him, he always looks like that.
Even if he was worried about the consequences after being deceived before, the prerequisite is that he is a man! When I saw this, I felt that this guy was a typical writer who could swap genders without any sense of inconsistency. He was like a god living in his own world, compassionate, self-pitying, self-proclaimed to be broad-minded, conscious of his deep love for the East, but not showing it on his face. You said he was indifferent at first, and I believed it, but what about his expression? Yes, he is indifferent and cold. He occasionally gives people a little sweetness, but always carries negative emotions on his face. I admire Dongfang for being able to stand him. Even if he repays the debt from 3 years ago, it will be enough, right?
And I don't know what kind of man the author wants to write about Dongfang. His nature is mentioned more than once in the article, but I think it is a piece of cake. Except when he first appeared, I really can't see his intelligence and calmness. Instead, I feel that this man is too humble about love, not worth it, and is very contemptuous. He is meticulous and considerate. He is a lover, rather than a wife slave or a nanny. And I didn't see the slightest bit of cunning and cunning that he should have in the mall...
Serves, this man must be the reincarnation of the Bodhisattva, the replica of the Holy Mother. His love words made me feel goosebumps all over the floor. Even if it was love at first sight, he has the confidence to promise his love to Shou. It is simply inexplicable. He just rushes abroad for him every three days. The two of them have only known each other for a little while. He doesn't understand Shou's personality at all, so he swears as if he knows everything. He also goes to warn Dongfang, which I would say is meddling in other people's business. Furthermore, as for Shou's unbearable insecurity for three days and two, Seves simply couldn't give it to him. Within a few months of leaving, Shou's character would have to think about things all the time. Seves was a public entertainer. If there was a scandal or something with others, Shou would have to curl up in a ball and lick his wounds alone and wait for others to coax him.
Ps: There seems to be more to say, but in general, the MS who is needed is not a lover, but a nanny who can provide warmth to his family anytime, anywhere, and coax people at any time, and Dongfang happens to be that nanny... As for Sevis, judging from his personality, he also has the potential to be a nanny...
Ps2: Why are they still 23 years old despite so many things happening? Let me tell you, even if the emotional journey of the two protagonists is added together, it only lasts for 4-5 years. There is really no deep love (before 70% of Parts 1-4).
I think Ye Jun's writing is very good. I'm really angry when I see someone criticizing it so openly. I'm so angry that I registered an account to support Ye Jun!
But I really don't like Xiaofeng. I should say that I don't agree with his views on love. I really like Dongfang. I hope Ye Ye will continue to work hard and write more good works! Come on!
This is the legendary entanglement and sadistic heart. Seeing how the little Shou is more gentle than a woman, sometimes I feel that I am really looking for sin.
In fact, I don't like so many endings. I think the most reasonable ending should be decided based on the character depicted before. In fact, when I first watched it, I didn't think Xiao Gong was that scary, but in the end it was a bit too much, because I think if an unintentional person really understands love, he will become gentler and gentler when dealing with things related to his lover. One more suggestion: if the author wants to write multiple endings, it might be better to write the ending he originally arranged in the main text first, and then finally write some other endings according to the readers' requirements. It may feel better in the extra chapter. The above are my initial impressions and suggestions after reading it in one go. They are purely personal opinions. If you disagree, please don't blame me. In addition, it can be seen that this article actually spent a lot of effort, and there is a lot of mental description. I personally like this, but in some places I feel that there are too many mental activities and it seems a bit lengthy. . .
… After reading it... I feel a bit sad... I didn't dare to watch the zero ending first. I really hope that Dongfang and Feng will be together...
I read this first but I'm not very satisfied... Dong is paranoid about his career, which is okay, it fits Dong's character very well. But he is even more paranoid about feelings, even worse...? ? ? ? And it suddenly turned into such a serious illness, it is difficult to understand... Sigh... Maybe finding a common goal in career will make the two people finally unite more convincingly. After all, both Dongfeng and Dongfeng are young people with ideals and ambitions. How did they end up "crying for their father and calling for their mother"? ? ? ? ? ? Isn't this consistent with their identities? ? ? ? A first-class institution of higher learning, as well as that ACCA (pay attention... Hum... Well... I'm working hard on this)? ? ? ? But after reading the whole article, I feel that Feng is just a family man, and ACCA alone shouldn't be like this! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! (A blow to... The ACCA I long for!!!!!!!!) Sometimes it is more like hypocrisy and posturing. This cannot be related to strong people in the business world. Dong Dao is the kind of person who can take things up and put them down. He is strong in the shopping mall and gentle and harmless at home. Isn't this the true nature of a successful person? ? ? Why did it end... Ugh... Anyway, I felt unhappy after seeing the ending. Why don't you have any clue when writing this feeling? ? ? ? I felt that no one understood me until the end, and no one belonged to me. Even in the end, it seemed like I had lost my most basic sense of shame and had to endure hardships. ? ? ? ? No injustice, no injustice... Be unfair to Dong!!!!!!!!!!!
Why not just let him die. In this way, this character is basically ruined.
The madness of love, as long as it has the last ending
This work is very interesting. At first I thought it would be unbearably sadistic, so I never dared to read it. One night I was really bored, so I started reading it from the middle. Unexpectedly, I became addicted while watching it, and got out of hand. Later I found the front and started watching it from the beginning. After staying up for two nights, I finally finished the whole work. After reading the work, the emotional description is very good and the inner description is also very rich. However, I still feel that Sevis is a little pitiful and sympathetic. I like several endings, whether they are sad or happy, whether it is with Sevis or with Dongfang Yu. However, some of the extra chapters were locked and I did not see it. I am a little regretful, but I am still very satisfied. It seems that the author started writing this story in 2007, and finally wrote it in 2009. It must have taken a lot of effort to write four parts, but I still want to read the first part, because there is an introduction at the end of the third part. I don't know how Dongfang Yu and Ning Feng progressed in the first part. It should be said that Dongfang Yu abused Ning Feng's heart, but from the beginning to the end of the article, I felt that the two were abusing each other, and sometimes Ning Feng even abused Dongfang Yu more. Of course, as a reader, I still prefer to think from the perspective of the recipient, so even if Dongfang Yu is abused, he deserves it. On the contrary, Ning Feng is abused and will feel sorry for him. However, I also want to know what happened to Wen Mo and Dongfang Yu? How Wen Mo and Lian XX viewed Ning Feng at the beginning. Although three years have passed, how did the several aristocratic young masters interact with Ning Feng. Three years later, it seems that although Ning Feng has seen everything clearly, he will still be angry at Wen Mo and others. This makes people laugh, and there is a slight psychological imbalance. Of course, I don't know if I didn't read it all, or if I wrote something else. I searched online, but couldn't find it. I don't know if the author will write more in the future, but I'm still looking forward to it. This work is very good, and the writing style is also very vivid. In particular, Xiao Shou is not written as the kind of fool who can be exploited by others. He has his own unique He has independent thoughts and an independent character. Even when he was wronged, he still maintained his arrogance. Although he still couldn't defeat Xiao Gong's pursuit in the end, it was still the kind of article that made people feel good after reading it. I hope the author can write more good articles like this for readers to enjoy~~~The author's reply: Haha~ Touch~ Thank you for liking~o(∩_∩)o..., The span is indeed a bit long... Sigh, mainly because I wrote more in the second half of 2008, otherwise it might really be delayed until 2009... But now those extra chapters and the first part will definitely be completed in 2009... ORZ, yes After finishing the new article, I will start writing the follow-up and the first part again... Mo, I'm sorry... Jinjiang Shangye's column is currently the most complete~ Wen Mo and the Lian brothers also had stories when it was originally set. Maybe I will write about them in the future... Thank you again~~hug~
I specially registered in Jinjiang for the night review~ It felt a little inconsistent that they were back together like that in the end! ! ! The rift between them still exists, and Hua Ya's matter is still unresolved. Although I understand the depth of their love for each other, at the same time, the use of each other's ties cannot be ignored... It feels like the two of them are still together with grudges. It is not a HE in the true sense, but it seems that the ending of Yan Fenfei's version is more reasonable and natural development! Anyway, when I saw the end, I suddenly had this thought in my mind: "How can we just be together like this?~!!! How can we just forgive so easily (it doesn't seem to be called forgiveness...)?!!!" Overall, the writing is still very good! The first two parts are more fascinating~ (Maybe because the first part is so exciting, the second one is relatively inferior in comparison...) It's wonderful~ Looking forward to more completed works~~! (Don't jump into the pit easily and never get over it~)
After reading 70% of the four parts of this novel, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I read the ending. Before I read it, I was still thinking why this article is so long. I really can't understand it. And now I finally understand From the vague expectation at the beginning (the beginning is really attractive to me, it is my cup of tea), then attracted by the plot, and finally slowly becoming impatient. I have to say, this article is a bit like a foot wrap, and the abuse is really inexplicable. I don't know if the author was inaccurate about the length and grasp of the content. The psychological activity of this Shou is really unparalleled. He can actually do this over and over again. After being touched for a few hours, he starts to be suspicious and dissatisfied after dozens of hours, and needs Dongfang to coax him. Then after he feels relieved, he keeps asking in his mind: Does he love me or not? Why hasn't he contacted me for so long? And this state is like this from the whole article to 70% of the part. The psychological description is too detailed, so detailed that it makes me feel collapsed, because no matter how much Dongfang coaxes him, he always looks like that. Even if he was worried about the consequences after being deceived before, the prerequisite is that he is a man! When I saw this, I felt that this guy was a typical writer who could swap genders without any sense of inconsistency. He was like a god living in his own world, compassionate, self-pitying, self-proclaimed to be broad-minded, conscious of his deep love for the East, but not showing it on his face. You said he was indifferent at first, and I believed it, but what about his expression? Yes, he is indifferent and cold. He occasionally gives people a little sweetness, but always carries negative emotions on his face. I admire Dongfang for being able to stand him. Even if he repays the debt from 3 years ago, it will be enough, right? And I don't know what kind of man the author wants to write about Dongfang. His nature is mentioned more than once in the article, but I think it is a piece of cake. Except when he first appeared, I really can't see his intelligence and calmness. Instead, I feel that this man is too humble about love, not worth it, and is very contemptuous. He is meticulous and considerate. He is a lover, rather than a wife slave or a nanny. And I didn't see the slightest bit of cunning and cunning that he should have in the mall... Serves, this man must be the reincarnation of the Bodhisattva, the replica of the Holy Mother. His love words made me feel goosebumps all over the floor. Even if it was love at first sight, he has the confidence to promise his love to Shou. It is simply inexplicable. He just rushes abroad for him every three days. The two of them have only known each other for a little while. He doesn't understand Shou's personality at all, so he swears as if he knows everything. He also goes to warn Dongfang, which I would say is meddling in other people's business. Furthermore, as for Shou's unbearable insecurity for three days and two, Seves simply couldn't give it to him. Within a few months of leaving, Shou's character would have to think about things all the time. Seves was a public entertainer. If there was a scandal or something with others, Shou would have to curl up in a ball and lick his wounds alone and wait for others to coax him. Ps: There seems to be more to say, but in general, the MS who is needed is not a lover, but a nanny who can provide warmth to his family anytime, anywhere, and coax people at any time, and Dongfang happens to be that nanny... As for Sevis, judging from his personality, he also has the potential to be a nanny... Ps2: Why are they still 23 years old despite so many things happening? Let me tell you, even if the emotional journey of the two protagonists is added together, it only lasts for 4-5 years. There is really no deep love (before 70% of Parts 1-4).
I think Ye Jun's writing is very good. I'm really angry when I see someone criticizing it so openly. I'm so angry that I registered an account to support Ye Jun! But I really don't like Xiaofeng. I should say that I don't agree with his views on love. I really like Dongfang. I hope Ye Ye will continue to work hard and write more good works! Come on!
This is the legendary entanglement and sadistic heart. Seeing how the little Shou is more gentle than a woman, sometimes I feel that I am really looking for sin.
In fact, I don't like so many endings. I think the most reasonable ending should be decided based on the character depicted before. In fact, when I first watched it, I didn't think Xiao Gong was that scary, but in the end it was a bit too much, because I think if an unintentional person really understands love, he will become gentler and gentler when dealing with things related to his lover. One more suggestion: if the author wants to write multiple endings, it might be better to write the ending he originally arranged in the main text first, and then finally write some other endings according to the readers' requirements. It may feel better in the extra chapter. The above are my initial impressions and suggestions after reading it in one go. They are purely personal opinions. If you disagree, please don't blame me. In addition, it can be seen that this article actually spent a lot of effort, and there is a lot of mental description. I personally like this, but in some places I feel that there are too many mental activities and it seems a bit lengthy. . .
… After reading it... I feel a bit sad... I didn't dare to watch the zero ending first. I really hope that Dongfang and Feng will be together... I read this first but I'm not very satisfied... Dong is paranoid about his career, which is okay, it fits Dong's character very well. But he is even more paranoid about feelings, even worse...? ? ? ? And it suddenly turned into such a serious illness, it is difficult to understand... Sigh... Maybe finding a common goal in career will make the two people finally unite more convincingly. After all, both Dongfeng and Dongfeng are young people with ideals and ambitions. How did they end up "crying for their father and calling for their mother"? ? ? ? ? ? Isn't this consistent with their identities? ? ? ? A first-class institution of higher learning, as well as that ACCA (pay attention... Hum... Well... I'm working hard on this)? ? ? ? But after reading the whole article, I feel that Feng is just a family man, and ACCA alone shouldn't be like this! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! (A blow to... The ACCA I long for!!!!!!!!) Sometimes it is more like hypocrisy and posturing. This cannot be related to strong people in the business world. Dong Dao is the kind of person who can take things up and put them down. He is strong in the shopping mall and gentle and harmless at home. Isn't this the true nature of a successful person? ? ? Why did it end... Ugh... Anyway, I felt unhappy after seeing the ending. Why don't you have any clue when writing this feeling? ? ? ? I felt that no one understood me until the end, and no one belonged to me. Even in the end, it seemed like I had lost my most basic sense of shame and had to endure hardships. ? ? ? ? No injustice, no injustice... Be unfair to Dong!!!!!!!!!!!
Why not just let him die. In this way, this character is basically ruined.
The madness of love, as long as it has the last ending
The last absolute classic.