Legend has it that on the seldom-traveled Broken Bridge Road, there's a small pawnshop that's reopened for business. It accepts all kinds of collateral, especially all sorts of "half-baked" pledges. The items are stranger than you can imagine: half a year's plans, only half a measure of courage, a heart that can never be still... The incredible thing is that everyone who pawns something ends up with an unexpected reward!
More and more people want to find this little pawnshop, but no one can find a way there. How will this mysterious shop make its return to public view?
The eldest brother, Bensatsuma, has finished reading the third chapter of his sister's essay. After reading the third chapter, he finally solved his doubts. In fact, the second chapter is the fugue chapter of the weapon soul in the first chapter. If this is the case, why not add some connecting words at the end of the first chapter or the beginning of the second chapter? It is there at the beginning of Chapter 3. Only with this kind of logic can readers read it in a targeted way~
This Satsuma came late, and I didn't expect that the author had already updated two chapters. After reading the second chapter, I saw that the author needed to make suggestions, so I shamelessly gave them. I forced myself not to read the third chapter and comment first. The second chapter really turned to the theme, but Bensatsuma said that there was no connection between the two chapters, and it was difficult to even connect the characters. The person in the scroll in the first chapter should be the weapon spirit, but who is it in the second chapter? The little girl with the grass and wood fairy has the highest probability, and the shop owner is also possible. She should not be that Aunt Jin. At the same time, I feel that the first and second chapters should be swapped. I can only look forward to the third chapter to clear up the confusion~
I haven't read this type of novel for a long time. It's okay. I look forward to continuing to update it.
I am the first to read the article every time. I am happy.
The modification is better than what I imagined, especially the first part is exactly what Ben Satsuma had in mind. Come on ⊙?⊙! Looking forward to your next chapter being published as soon as possible~ Some people have good integrity, some people have good character, some people have good IQ... But... I'm in a good mood, I'm going to fuck you up, don't dive in and come out to write
I wonder if Ben Satsuma is the first reader? The topic of the article is good. It is a fantasy novel that Ben Satsuma likes. Taking the pawn shop next to Naihe Bridge as the main line, it is novel and creative, with broad room for development. Although the first chapter didn't touch on this aspect at all, the foreshadowing at the end of the chapter indicates that the next chapter will probably get into the theme. In addition, I don't know if it is a problem with the system's transcoding and typesetting. I found one wrong sentence, one inappropriate wording, and one typo. They are all quite obvious and can be found upon reading. The author is asked to correct them in time after reading them. At the end, it's only the first chapter, so it's hard to finish at the beginning, so I'll give the author a bouquet of flowers and a small gift afterwards to encourage me. I look forward to your better performance in the next chapter~