
Quick Transmigration: Emptiness
快穿之空
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 4k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
10Chapters
22Favorites
1Nutrient gifts
428Clicks per chapter
12Comments
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No, author, (big?) Geography knowledge is not up to standard, so don't talk nonsense! It will mislead others. The Milky Way is larger than the Solar System. The universe is divided into extragalactic galaxies and the Milky Way. The Milky Way is divided into the solar system and other star systems}
The copywriting is a direct copy of "The Wind Blows", and the content is currently about the mermaid. Some completely unnecessary things in the movie have also been put in. The protagonist's character seems to be too thin at the moment. . . You can practice your writing skills, but don't directly copy other people's copywriting. This behavior is not good. . . . . .
Isn't the copywriting like a country that has been blown by the strong wind for many years??
I don't object to you copying movies, but some plots can only show their laughter in movies. If you copy the novel in this way, it just feels long-winded and confusing. It just helps to recall the movie. I think if you really want to write a good novel, you can delete some plots and create new plots. Secondly, the protagonist is completely different from the heroine in the movie in terms of character creation from the first chapter. He is not a naive mermaid Shanshan who has no experience in the world. He has a deep and shady mind. However, in the subsequent performance of the article, it is difficult to reflect his personality and thoughts. In addition to deleting some embarrassing plots, it is the sexual change of the Little Mermaid in the movie. Finally, I want to say that I am not criticizing your article, I just hope it is better. The character you gave the protagonist in the beginning is very good, so Su Zhaotian has expectations. Please forgive me if any offense is caused.
The author is pasting Master Xing's movie intact, even the plot here is so similar.
Is this the movie Mermaid?