The Longevity Incantation

Rereading this chapter, I loved it!!! Perfect point, immortality is not something you desire but a curse, because this curse can only be achieved by deceiving oneself and others, but it is useless. It makes me cry!!!!

After reading Black Moonlight, I read this book again. The author ranks among the top three among my favorite authors, come on!

Well... That's generally explained clearly. But there are still some details that should be specific. For example, after the two protagonists met, they fell in love with each other. There are only some previous paragraphs in the article, talking about acquaintance and falling in love. But how this process develops in the middle is still not specified. It was also mentioned in the previous article that Wu Huan was considered by everyone to be a female devil. But why did Hua Xingyuan kill her? Was it because Wu Huan wanted to improve his reputation after being framed by Yong Ye Tower? Then how did he know that Ah Ruan and Wu Huan knew each other? It should also be made clearer here. And how did Wu Huan survive when Hua Xingyuan broke his hand tendon and kept his martial arts skills intact? Then there is the matter of longevity, which Meng Huanjue has been planning for fifteen years. But how did he find Wu Huan, who was still a beggar at that time, among the vast crowd? So what made the master adopt her? Is it possible to find someone so easily? There are other aspects of supporting roles, and some details are not explained clearly, so I won't go into details. But I think the ending is indeed a bit unclear. Meng Huanjue died so hastily, and then Wu Huan was reincarnated? Didn't I say before that the Immortal Yin also requires five poisons or something like that? Why don't they just have to live forever as long as the time is right? Also, as for the ending, after all, there are some important supporting characters that can be mentioned in a follow-up, maybe even a sentence. Otherwise, it always feels like it disappears so suddenly. Okay, am I talking too much? After all, it was written with great care by the young author. Generally speaking, in terms of emotions, it is okay, it develops normally and is not abrupt. But in terms of plot, I think it is still a bit weak and lacks details. If it's the first time I write it, it's pretty good! Keep working hard, it will get better and better in the future.

Finished reading! It was as fine and dense as a needle prick.

After a while, I suddenly thought of this chapter again to reflect on it. Hehe, I can do this ending!!!!

The ending and plot are getting more and more depressing the more I watch them. The two female protagonists are constantly injured and abused, and some parts are not explained clearly. If it weren't for the person who bought the article, I would have given up!

The author's writing is very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. The main plot of the Immortality Curse could actually be longer. The villain boss dies a bit quickly, so a few more chapters should be left to increase the hatred value. Every time I read what the author has to say, I feel that the author is very cute. I look forward to the author's next book ヾ?≧?≦)O

Although the ending is a bit rushed, I feel much better than a few weeks ago when I thought the last chapter was the ending. Maybe the reality is really cruel, so I hope that the fake one can be more dreamy and beautiful. I will say goodbye.

Ah, Ruan Zhen is the perfect lover, but it's so miserable. Stepmother!!!

Real name I want a soft A Ruan