[One Piece] An Angel's Redemption

In terms of writing, I have improved a lot compared to my good brother, and my logic is also better. But in terms of plot, it wasn't as touching as Good Brother. I cried for a long time in Watch Good Brother's War on the Top, almost until I finished watching it. On the contrary, this article is a little dull, and it also cuts down on getting along with Luffy and the Straw Hats. Generally speaking, Good Brother is better in terms of plot, but in terms of writing and logic, Adventure is more advanced. You can read the first half of this article and the second half to see Good Brother. Because the writing style of the second half of Good Brother has also been improved.

It's finished ヾ(≧∪≦*)ノIt's great. The writing has improved. I've read the good brother's article a long time ago. I didn't expect that I would edit it again. I'm glad I found it. Special thanks to the author for writing this article! ! ! ! ! ! It satisfies my full regret for Ace, but I really want to read their story two years later. If you have time, can you add some extra stories? Please (≧ω≦)/

Compared with my good brother, the writing style has really improved a lot. I really want to watch the extras, but they must be gone after such a long time. I really like this article. Wow.

Damn it, you bastard, do you have to die? I cried to death. I watched Good Brother continuously and then this one. Damn it, I was so emo by you. I feel like I want to write a side story. I want a sweet side story. The sugar is shining in my mouth. Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh.

? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Good guy! ! ! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh why why does one have to die? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Cried Maybe people have been repeating the process of moths flying into the flame throughout their lives. Because the light is too dazzling, so many people want to get close to it, even if they die.

I just want to ask a question, where is the group?

It's over. I'm a little disappointed. I still want to watch it to see their future.

Woohoo, why are you so kind? In the end, the only one who feels uncomfortable is yourself.

The end of spreading flowers?(??????ω???????)?