After Becoming a Delicate White Lotus, I Made Everyone Kneel and Sing My Praises

In the emotional line, I feel that the female protagonist is not worthy of the male protagonist.

I think the setting is okay, just the emotional aspect, a bit. . .

I waited patiently until I reached chapter 43 but had no choice but to jump directly to the last chapter. . . At first, I thought it was a sweet novel about a poor turned serf singing, but I didn't expect it to be about the love and hatred between Lin Pinru and Hong Shixian; After I finally accepted this fairly acceptable setting, she transformed into Lin Pinru's career line of cultivating immortals and seeking Taoism. She can do anything with her golden fingers; I thought this book was a good read, but I didn't expect that I still underestimated the author's level. . . . . This is a story about an ancient Mary Sue who has golden fingers and is a beautiful immortal cultivator who is reborn in a different world and can continue cultivating immortals, starting a business, and flirting with little puppies. I don't know the specific setting of the story. . . . . Friends who read the article later, please be careful. . .

I hope the male protagonist can also practice cultivation. I can't bear to let the male protagonist be sad.

Why did it feel like it stopped suddenly? It felt so sudden!

Just add two extra chapters, a child, and immortality for two...

How can I put it this way? It's good that the heroine is ambitious, but the emotional line is not very good. It feels a bit like one party's compromise and one party's charity. Although I think that in love, there may be one party who may give a little more, but in this article, it feels like it is too much, and the heroine's feelings for the hero are more just touching, not love. I think in love, if one party gives more, the other party should respond to this contribution, instead of being hot-faced and cold-butt. I feel like in this article, if the man didn't lower his attitude so much, they wouldn't be together or even get married. This is the first time I have written so many words. When I read about chapter 80, my first thought was why the slap in the face plot is not over yet. I feel that this article focuses too much on the plot of the heroine's slap in the face. I feel that the description of the heroine's image is a bit one-sided and superficial. But I feel that the most serious thing is the portrayal of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Regarding the relationship between the two parties, my feelings are that first I felt that the woman finally had someone who truly loved her, and the interaction between the two during the man's crush period was really sweet [star eyes]; then when they were together for two days, it was no longer as sweet as before. I just felt that the woman was only with the man because she was moved, not love; when the two finally got married, I already felt that this article only wanted a perfect ending for the two to get married. In my eyes, it is really irresponsible for one party to still hesitate when it comes to discussing marriage, regardless of whether he or she is a man or woman. If you don't want to get married and are afraid of worrying about your career, you should say that you are not married as soon as possible, instead of coveting a career and not getting married, and at the same time thinking that you will always have a partner who loves you. This kind of wanting and wanting, asking your partner to lower their profile and compromise, in my eyes, is no different from the previous overbearing articles, it is just a gender swap. In true love, the status of both parties should be equal, or there should be a level but not too much difference. Rather than just one party giving too much, like this article. In reality, the one who gives too much will always be tired and cannot wait for his or her partner's response, and your partner may think that your contribution is natural. You have to give more than before, so that your partner will always be with you. This is really a bit like PUA. In such a situation, it is impossible for two people to have a long-term relationship. I really feel that the description of the relationship between the two should not be about the heroine discovering that she likes the hero because something happened to him. The relationship between the two should be natural, so that readers can feel that the two people should be together and married at this time, instead of because the male protagonist was injured to protect the female protagonist or almost died in an earthquake when he came back to see the female protagonist. The female protagonist realized that she liked the male protagonist and agreed to be with him. Only then did she realize that she loved the male protagonist so she agreed to marry him. Even in the end, whether or not she wanted to have children, the female protagonist was just worried that her merits would be reduced a lot. She didn't even think about the male protagonist's grievances. It was like she was waiting for the male protagonist to lower her posture and compromise once again, and then the female protagonist could make excuses for her irresponsible behavior. Even if the gender is swapped, I still think that this kind of behavior should be resisted. This is not love, it is just charity from a high-ranking person to a low-ranking person. Even if I am with you, you should lower your profile, instead of me taking you to heart, and put you on an equal footing. Your suggestions will be considered when things like getting married and having children, and if there is a problem, we will discuss solutions with you. In short, if you just read it as a fun article, you can read it, but if you want to read it as a sweet article, my suggestion is to read other articles.

It looks okay from the front, but feels like it from the back. . Have eaten. . That's the same

The heroine is a real heroine, she has love in her heart, but she also loves herself~~~ I have always felt that love based on hurting yourself is too flawed. And you can't understand the mentality of those who don't develop their career after rebirth or are still obsessed with love?

The emotional line is a bit emmmm, so it feels like the relationship between the heroine and the hero is a bit playful. It might be better if there is no love line. But still great