The Villain's Frail Moonlight [Book Transmigration]

The word "grievance" came to my mind when I read it. I shouldn't have read this book at night. I thought the ending would be like a thing in the palm of my hand, which made me cry out. But the ending turned out to be so powerless, as if the heroine's previous struggles were in vain and everything was back to the original point. It was really depressing.

The plot in the beginning was very good, but it was a bit messy in the middle, and then the plot back in I thought was a bit boring and childish. Fortunately, the ending is okay.

As a fan of yandere genre, I like this article. The things in the story cannot be completely translated into reality. Whoever stipulates that the male protagonist of the novel must have correct views. However, considering that the people reading the article may not be adults, it is recommended to mention it in the introduction of the article. Under certain situations of violence or threats, remind minors what they can do if they encounter such situations. (?°3°?)

I'm jumping to read this, the author is so versatile, he can write Lily, Danmei and romance?? So awesome

The heroine's brother died? Terrible(?óò?)

If you are serious, you can still say that you are showing the indifference of society and the struggles of small people. I couldn't stand it anymore and bought the last chapter. Don't let things like this come up and cause harm to people.

In fact, it would be better if there were no extra episodes. In addition, I personally think that this book is more appropriately called Crazy. After all, after reading the whole book, these two words popped into my head, and even my best friend was full of malice. Somewhat similar to The Rebirth of Black Heart Apple, it is too heavy-handed. The dark type is much better than Dada. Also recommended to take a look~ Because the big story is full of malice and dilutes the existence of light. This is a pity. Male partner? That really doesn't count. I am a reader who is accustomed to reading reviews first before reading books. It is strange that many books I have written have negative comments below them. I read this book with a skeptical review attitude. There is no problem with the writing style and the writing is very smooth. But the style of the work is by no means light-hearted. It feels obvious that part of the novel collapsed, causing the light-heartedness I wanted to write to fly away. I guess it is the setting of the characters that completely changed the direction of the plot. Therefore, the plot is unreasonable and the characters are imperfect. Specifically referring to Ye Xiaotong. It's hard for me to believe that given the character of the heroine, she would recognize such a person and regard her as a friend. There are also those whose emotions and personalities are not in place and whose views are wrong. You must not publish them. Even the situation in the extra episode is completely unreasonable!!! You have written many books, and you have complained about this point below. I also feel it deeply. This needs to be changed. I am also writing a novel myself, not in Jinjiang. Because of the bottleneck character's personality setting, it was completely impossible for him to follow the outline route, so he had to rewrite it multiple times. If I guessed wrong, emmmm, I apologize. If you guess correctly, I suggest that when you can't control the character, you can work backwards through the desired outcome and follow the path that the author needs according to the character's personality. In this way, the character's behavior will also be rationalized. This is what I did. The details are gone, but the outline remains, and the ending remains unchanged. Hehe~ Don't believe that this article is a pet article. Non-existent ╮(╯▽╰)╭ If you read the introduction carefully, you will know that the ease in the basic information of the article is just a lie. This book has good highlights. The most outstanding one is the scene where the heroine commits suicide in the back of the book. It takes advantage of the public's humanity and the distorted love of the hero. He took revenge on Zhou Yuzhi and the hero's father. There are bad ones, such as Ye Xiaotong mentioned earlier. For example, the scene where Bai Yueguang's parents have already discovered through others that the heroine is not Bai Yueguang herself is not perfect, has loopholes, and lacks enough foreshadowing. This directly leads to the fact that the scene is not shocking enough, leaving only malice. There are failures. The heroine's character shouldn't be like this even if she doesn't succeed in getting rid of the hero. Rigidity, did you actually give in and accept your fate because of emotional confusion in the end? At the beginning, I struggled with nothing, but I was able to resist the successful male protagonist, and then I returned to the original point. I've struggled, so I'm back, is that right??? You write very hard and update quickly. So happy as a reader. But the shortcomings of the story are also obvious and can be said to be fatal. A story that was crumbling and about to collapse, but you turned the tide and reached the ending. Maybe you gave up the character's personality in the later stage in order to achieve the ending. The three perspectives, characters, and story lines are all twisted, and none of them lasted until the end. Come on~ Well, I just want to say that this author's writing is not as bad as the reviews say. By the way, sir, I originally planned to re-read all the chapters. The author had something to say and wanted to confirm your outline. I lost my strength by the end of Chapter 4. Do you still remember, the first sentence in Chapter 4 when the author has something to say? [I am a pet writer. Perfect~ It took me a long time to write this review, and I suppressed a lot of content. So sleepy, good night (￣o￣) . Z Z

(His Miss Jiao) The protagonist Zhu Shuai Jiang Ke, why can't I find it? Can anyone help me?

This novel is so artistic and philosophical!

After reading it, I felt very heavy and slightly sad.