After Waking Up, I Took the Entire Galaxy by Storm

After reading the copy, I still thought about who "Serious Sound" was.

Author, have you forgotten this article? Why haven't you updated it yet?

It feels like Shou's golden finger is so big that it doesn't feel real. Although the person who "rescued" Shou is a man who waits and wants to take advantage of others, this person feels a bit mentally retarded. Everything about Shou is attributed to him being a "young master"? If he is a real young master, even if he is not favored, he should have some common sense about supernatural powers. I'm also very jealous. It's not that it's not good to ask directly, but I just haven't considered that it might be too abrupt and strange in the eyes of others. It felt like Lin Han was just an NPC who sent out quests to answer questions. Gong's behavior is as if he is being beheaded by someone. What if Shou is a dangerous person who has escaped or something, and official supplies can be used casually? I don't want to delve into the behavior left behind by the test tube. Anyway, it's just an important NPC who comes to give experience to serve as a background for the future. -_-||| It's not that this kind of thinking is bad. Many articles use this routine, but the author's handling of it is so rigid that it feels fake. Emmm, come on, author, everyone commented that this is the author's debut novel? I completely understand that I felt stiff and unfamiliar when I first wrote the article. I couldn't express what I wanted to express after polishing it.

Therefore, Lin's reward for saving the hero is so quick.

I vaguely remember that it takes about 7 or 8 minutes for light to travel from the sun to the earth, definitely not more than 10 minutes. Does this device take 20 minutes to reach the moon at the speed of light? Is it because the speed of light in your home is different from that in mine...

I'm looking forward to your second book. I need to practice more on the transitions. At least the beginning is great. Later, the relationship changes too quickly. Everything seems to be solved easily. I can't feel the joy of surviving a desperate situation. Come on~

I feel like this is the first draft of my writing. There are many places where I don't understand the language, and I sometimes jump directly to the next stage without explanation. I hope you can work harder~

Dinner? What(? O?;

Wrong score! If you didn't watch it, you should give it 0 points! Returning -2 is exactly 0 points!

OMG, after reading the copy for a long time, I don't know which article is the copy of this article!