? ? Call the author?
Contemplation? Is that what I understand? ?
Is the male protagonist being played? ! !
Why does everyone want to involve her? She is just a person who lost her father and mother in her early years. She has nothing but intelligence. Just because most of the men in the show have a crush on her, and then compete for her, the heroine is regarded as the reward of this power game. The heroine is smart, but a series of things that follow are considered smart but are misunderstood, which harms this damn so-called relationship.
One more thing I would like to know: What is Mr. Jiang plotting? Why does his wife put a hat on him?
Ah ah ah ah. In fact, the biggest problem with the article is that the two branches of Master Jiang and the Qi family are explained clearly. I am really confused!
There are still some uncertainties. Who gave Jiang Jiu to Lang Xiu when she was working as a cashier? How's the poison from ginger wine? What is Langxiu's feelings for Jiang Jiu? The imagination is too big, and I am really scratching my head in confusion.
The writing is like a clear wave, calm and unhurried, but sometimes it is very tense and relaxed. However, the subject of some sentences is really unclear, and the scene transition still lacks the sense of picture. The problem is not big, but it affects the perception. After all, the problem is easy to correct, but such writing style is rare.
I like the story very much, it's just a pity that it didn't meet a much more mature writing style! Best wishes!
Ah, this is dead. The amount of information is too much... It's so hard for me to accept it.
Help, I find it really hard to understand some sentences without clearly stating the subject. It feels like too much of a stream of consciousness. Sometimes I get stuck in a paragraph and have to look back and forth before I can understand it.
I cried for the tassel. Give me the address. I sent you the blade. I cried.
Thank you for your hard work! The early story is very good, the structure is clear, the writing is fresh, and the description of Jiang Jiu's little moves is humorous. A Qi is so cute! The two years of living with Master Jiang were accompanied by Jiang Jiu's girlish thoughts, and A Qi's protectiveness... But when the plot was cut to Jiang Jiu and A Qi's reunion in the garden, things got a little messy. The image of Xiao Jiu in my mind as a flat-chested, cold, unrestrained, romantic, long-haired tomboy was gone...
At the end, when Jiang Jiu thought about Master Jiang not being able to see this, I felt sad, but Xiaojiu still cared about Master Jiang. What are Master Jiang's feelings for Xiaojiu? It's probably a bit like forbidden love, it's really a bad relationship. Great story, cheers!
I really like this story! Except for a small part in the front and middle that is a bit messy, everything else is very good. The most important thing is that the ending is good hahahahahahaha. Thank you for the limited fee!
I don't know what to say, I feel confused looking at it. Thanks for free
? ? Call the author? Contemplation? Is that what I understand? ? Is the male protagonist being played? ! !
Why does everyone want to involve her? She is just a person who lost her father and mother in her early years. She has nothing but intelligence. Just because most of the men in the show have a crush on her, and then compete for her, the heroine is regarded as the reward of this power game. The heroine is smart, but a series of things that follow are considered smart but are misunderstood, which harms this damn so-called relationship.
One more thing I would like to know: What is Mr. Jiang plotting? Why does his wife put a hat on him? Ah ah ah ah. In fact, the biggest problem with the article is that the two branches of Master Jiang and the Qi family are explained clearly. I am really confused!
There are still some uncertainties. Who gave Jiang Jiu to Lang Xiu when she was working as a cashier? How's the poison from ginger wine? What is Langxiu's feelings for Jiang Jiu? The imagination is too big, and I am really scratching my head in confusion. The writing is like a clear wave, calm and unhurried, but sometimes it is very tense and relaxed. However, the subject of some sentences is really unclear, and the scene transition still lacks the sense of picture. The problem is not big, but it affects the perception. After all, the problem is easy to correct, but such writing style is rare. I like the story very much, it's just a pity that it didn't meet a much more mature writing style! Best wishes!
Ah, this is dead. The amount of information is too much... It's so hard for me to accept it.
Help, I find it really hard to understand some sentences without clearly stating the subject. It feels like too much of a stream of consciousness. Sometimes I get stuck in a paragraph and have to look back and forth before I can understand it.
I cried for the tassel. Give me the address. I sent you the blade. I cried.
Thank you for your hard work! The early story is very good, the structure is clear, the writing is fresh, and the description of Jiang Jiu's little moves is humorous. A Qi is so cute! The two years of living with Master Jiang were accompanied by Jiang Jiu's girlish thoughts, and A Qi's protectiveness... But when the plot was cut to Jiang Jiu and A Qi's reunion in the garden, things got a little messy. The image of Xiao Jiu in my mind as a flat-chested, cold, unrestrained, romantic, long-haired tomboy was gone... At the end, when Jiang Jiu thought about Master Jiang not being able to see this, I felt sad, but Xiaojiu still cared about Master Jiang. What are Master Jiang's feelings for Xiaojiu? It's probably a bit like forbidden love, it's really a bad relationship. Great story, cheers!
I really like this story! Except for a small part in the front and middle that is a bit messy, everything else is very good. The most important thing is that the ending is good hahahahahahaha. Thank you for the limited fee!
I don't know what to say, I feel confused looking at it. Thanks for free