Escape Plan from the Otherworldly Black Hole [Reborn]

It's so unfinished, I feel like it would take at least one or two hundred chapters to describe the plot in the next dozen chapters, which is a pity. Or it would be good if the plot behind it is cut off and the heroine returns home successfully while going to town to look at the clock. I feel that some small plot points can be changed. For example, I recognized the younger brother later in the plot. I asked him to look at the Jian Zhong together to activate his abilities so that he could protect the career left behind by the heroine. However, in the end, he and the heroine actually passed through the Jian Zhong together. After reading the plot, I felt that the male protagonist, as a tool to promote the plot, really needs to wear the mirror together. This will make it easier for the subsequent plot to unfold, and it can be considered a full circle. I think that being the case, we can delete the previous description of wanting the male partner to activate his bloodline ability to protect property and people, or give another reason why he wants the male partner to look at the mirror [_(:зゝ∠)_ I originally didn't care about the property and the people who care about the heroine after she leaves, but after you added that description, madam, I couldn't help but care. When I saw the male partner wearing the mirror together, I really had questions on my head! There are also some plots that I feel can be modified to make them more reasonable, but for a while I can only think of this plot. The divisions between untouchables, commoners, nobles, etc. In the novel reminded me of the Indian caste system. The bottom line is that you can get up through hard work, but India is fooling around and suffering everything in this life for the next life, tsk tsk. But overall, it's very good, the flaws are not hidden, and the imaginative settings are amazing! Nice writing! The characters are also pretty smart. Personally, I really like novels with novel world settings. When I read this book, I always thought of some writers who have great imagination and have become gods. From this book alone, I am very optimistic about you, madam (*￣3￣)╭? I hope you can write better and better.

The author wanted to write a big story but was not able to write it well. From the moment of suspended animation, the character setting and the plot were distorted. The ending was only because she was the heroine. I hope the author can broaden his mind and write better after get off work.

The first part of the story is very exciting, and the setting of the world is very interesting. After seeing the second part, I started to skip... There are a few things that I don't understand: 1. The heroine should have struggled in the bottom of the pit for more than 20 years in her previous life (if I remember correctly). As a low-level person who was exploited and oppressed, she didn't seem to have any ill feelings towards the nobles after her rebirth. I originally thought that the male protagonist was just a tool for the heroine to escape, but I didn't expect that the heroine really fell in love. I don't understand; 2. After arriving in the New World, it was good to build infrastructure, but why did you change the democratic elections that were good to hereditary? (Although the heroine said that those who are capable will be chosen, she did not take any actual action at all. In the end, she let her own children inherit) (There is a passage that mentions that her children are the best among their peers, but according to their status, others dare not perform better, right?)

Well, what can I say, this article is very attractive to me, whether it is the character of the heroine or the world view constructed by the author. But it fell apart later on, and it felt like it was inexplicable since the heroine left the Holy City and returned there. So sad, so lost. The ending is really sloppy, and obviously it can be described later, but it's really just a so-so ending, and it feels like a breath is stuck in your throat. I was all ready to watch the grand unfolding of Jinjiang coins later, but it actually ended? The setting of this article is obviously so good, soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo of of this article.

1—Author, heroine, human being? 2-The heroine is a freshman in high school. She didn't graduate from high school and went directly to the outside world to get married, have children and start a career. I can understand it. After all, after decades in this other world, she has almost forgotten all the knowledge. The college entrance examination is also hell. The author's heroine's personal self-choice, and the heroine can also live a good life, I won't say anything else. 3-The author has some ideological problems in some aspects, because the heroine needs to live a good life in another world, and these materials cannot be used without making them, so she bought books from all walks of life and then brought them to the other world to develop the other world? ? How big is your face? 4-Have you never thought about the various benefits the country provides you? Compulsory education, scholarship? Medical insurance? You go to another world for decades, buy and sell back and forth, come back to shop, and then take your mother to another world. What else do you do after that? Everything was fine in the beginning, but at the end there was a continuation of the story, which was so successful that it made me sick. This outlaw heroine! 5-When you study until high school, no matter how busy you are, you have always studied politics and history, right? You always know about war, right? So you always know that in such a time, the flow of time is faster than that of the mainland, and you can also connect to other worlds in the mainland. Can you ensure that there will be no war between them? Will these books and knowledge that I brought with me be used for aggression one day in the future? What the heroine did disappointed me. 6——Then I was disgusted again. You must abide by the rules everywhere. What did you transport back to your home country in another world? Are you so confident that we won't find out and catch you? I hope that little trash Lu Chao can hand over the map of the alien world to the country, but the words of a mentally ill person are not trustworthy. . . 7-Later, the heroine made another operation. Compared with him, the household registration was not even mentioned. What do you want to do when you bring your children to the country's territory? Illegal entry? After that, leave a route for future generations, and continue to enter the country illegally? With the author's thoughts and the things the heroine has done, shouldn't I thank you on behalf of my motherland? ! At any rate, I didn't publicly insult or slander, I just served as a leader, no, no, no, I just helped the poor and helped a foreign country from another world that will face the line in the future. Using the country's resources, you said you bought the books yourself and spent money? Piracy must be investigated! To put it most seriously, this person is treasonous. Yes, I just think her behavior is betrayal of the country. It is said that science has no borders, but scientists have countries! I don't think it matters if you entertain yourself and build it yourself. After all, you are entertaining yourself, but are you using it to make a profit? ? To build another country? ? ? After all, the country that sent the resources didn't know that this happened, and the country that received the knowledge didn't know that these were spread from another country. Therefore, it is logical that the two countries did not establish friendly diplomacy on this basis, or a certain area of ​​xx country that was happy. What will happen in the future? Learn from the barbarians and learn skills to control the barbarians? Did something go wrong? Could it be that you are an undercover agent, happily running towards a bright future? After reading these chapters 8-182-188, I gave these chapters a separate title, which is "On the Role of Foreign Queens in the Development of a Certain Country" 9--Friendly message from reader Liulichao on July 29, 2021

It's a great book. It's a rare book that I can read in its entirety.

After I gave birth to a baby, I immediately completed the unfinished chapters. It's great, all the hard work comes with joy.

If the sea water turns yellow, remember it should be caused by the upstream water source bringing sediment into the sea water? This does not seem to be environmental pollution, but a problem of soil erosion.

Happy ending! The cat-eye beast is still so healthy.

The male protagonist is disappointing. Like many ancient male protagonists, he can't accept that the female protagonist likes him later.