[Katekyo Hitman Reborn!/Hibari] The Growing-Up Story of a Big Cat and His Childhood Friend
[主家教/云雀]大猫竹马的青梅成长史
by Mo XiaobeiMoMo (墨小北MoMo)
Synopsis
(JJ has been acting up lately. Sometimes the author dashboard says everything is fine, but some chapters are locked. If you find a chapter you can't read, please leave a comment telling me which one. I'll fix it as soon as I see it! Sorry to trouble you, little angels!) This is the story of a gentle, guileless childhood friend who likes to make little snarky comments, has very little sense of security, and thinks she's completely ordinary, though she actually is fairly ordinary. Under the influence and doting affection of her extremely violent, arrogant, and willful childhood friend, a severe chuunibyou, she gradually comes to know her true self and let it shine. In the end, just as everyone expected, her childhood friend carries her home, where she can keep making trouble to her heart's content and live happily ever after... A little scene: Ten years ago A: "Sawada Otoko is just a pretty face. She's nothing special." Sawada Otoko: (sweet smile) Inside, she's exploded into a fuzzy little ball. Hibari the big cat: (disdainful) Carries her off for more training. Ten years later A: "Sawada Otoko is just a pretty face. She's nothing special." Sawada Otoko: (excited smile) Pulls out a scalpel. Hibari the big cat: (calmly) Stands amid the corpses of a whole gang of accomplices. Sawada Otoko: (sweetly) "Kyoya, I just beat up the xx family." Hibari the big cat: (patting her head) "Mm. Let's go home." Sawada Tsunayoshi: (rubbing his forehead) Can someone stop them? To put it more simply, the heroine has issues, and this story is the record of her progress through treatment. Please note before reading: 1. The male lead is set, it's a BG romance, and that will not change. 2. As for keeping the characters in character, I'll do my best not to derail Hibari while writing the version of him in my heart. 3. This story is extremely slow-burn. Early on, it's farming and daily life; in the middle, character growth; and romance comes later. 4. Although the heroine transmigrates into a manga world and knows what kind of world it is, don't expect her to remember the plot or anything like that. 5. The heroine isn't a Mary Sue. Her unusual circumstances give her tremendous fighting ability, but for the same reason, she's not going to be the strongest or anything like that. 6. This blurb is based on the first version of the novel. I've revised it, but it still doesn't quite fit. I've done my best, considering how bad I am at writing blurbs. 7. The author is terrible at coming up with names. I still couldn't think of a better one by the time I finished, so this is what we're going with! That's all. If it's not for you, please move along. One last thing: I originally posted this blurb on my old account while I was still drafting the story. For various reasons, I lost access to the writing features on that account, so I made a new one and moved the blurb here. If it looks familiar, don't be surprised. (Though I doubt anyone's reading a blurb for a story that hasn't officially started yet...) ---This story is complete, so please enjoy. The following is an ad for another story by the author--- Because of a Show (working title) A once wildly popular, now making a comeback and hated across the internet VS a hardworking producer who says one thing but means another A singer who's hated across the internet: commanding on stage yet easily embarrassed, gentle and dependable offstage with the occasional silly streak, and able to switch effortlessly between four different sides of himself: Ye Baichen Meets A music producer and writer who's aloof and reserved on the surface, lazy and a little spacey underneath, and secretly a devoted fan despite vehemently denying it: Lin Yao And so their story begins... From the male lead's perspective: How does a comeback singer who once had millions of fans but is now hated across the internet turn his reputation around? From the heroine's perspective: How does someone who's only half in the entertainment industry become famous overnight? The answer: Because of a show... (In six words: a sweet entertainment-industry romance.) A little excerpt (1) Lin Yao's first press interview "Lin Yao, the opening theme you just sang with Ye Baichen has some very suggestive lyrics. Were they inspired by your own experiences?" Faced with a reporter fishing for gossip, Lin Yao answers cautiously: "No, they mainly reflect the relationship between the two leads in the show." Beside her, Ye Baichen nods repeatedly. Reporter: "The theme song was an instant hit with the public as soon as it was released. As its creator, what would you like to say?" Lin Yao: "I'm happy and surprised, but most of the credit goes to Chengcheng. He made the music sound so good." Ye Baichen, aka Chengcheng, is suddenly called out and bashfully covers his cheeks: "...Being praised to my face like this is a little embarrassing..." The reporter smiles. "Chengcheng, what do you think?" Ye Baichen: (lowers his hands, looking serious) "I think the song's success is mainly thanks to Lin Yao's arrangement. Arrangement is very important in a song. If it's done well and the feeling is right, everything comes together and sounds great. If it's done badly, the song is basically ruined. I think Lin Yao and I really click. We have a lot of the same instincts when it comes to music, and I really like her arrangement for this song." (As he speaks, he suddenly gets shy again and covers his face.) "Um... Of course, I also think the music I wrote this time sounds great..." The whole room bursts into laughter, and the atmosphere suddenly relaxes. Lin Yao can't help laughing too. (2) About the whole fan thing 1. Someone asks: "Lin Yao, I hear you're a die-hard Ye Baichen fan?" Lin Yao, surprised: "How could that be? No, I'm not!" Not long afterward, netizens uncover Lin Yao's secret Weibo account. Following: Ye Baichen. Posts: Reposts, likes, and comments on every one of Ye Baichen's Weibo posts. Dates: From six years ago right up to the present. 2. Best friend: "You're a Ye Baichen fan?" Lin Yao: "No, I just appreciate him." Best friend: "Bull! You were playing his playlist on repeat again, weren't you?" Lin Yao: "Just a coincidence." Best friend: "Bull! I've been standing outside your door for ten minutes, and the last three songs were all his!" Lin Yao: "Did you need something?" (If not, get lost.) Best friend: "I was going to give you this VIP ticket to Ye Baichen's concert, but if you're not a fan, never mind." Lin Yao (snatching it up): "We've been friends for years. I have to accept a gift from you. Well, don't let me keep you!" 3. After they get together Ye Baichen: "I hear you're my fan?" Lin Yao: "No!" Ye Baichen: "Then what are these?" The table is covered with different editions of Ye Baichen's albums, collected by Lin Yao. Lin Yao, solemnly: "I bought them while I was out." Ye Baichen, looking conflicted: "...Don't take advantage of the fact that my Chinese isn't very good. I do know what 'while I was out' means." Lin Yao, completely serious: "I'm really not your fan! I'm your little tabby, just like you're my Alaskan Malamute..." Ye Baichen's ears turn red. He grins foolishly for a long while, then says, "...I like that line. I can put it in my new song." Lin Yao: "..." Please note before reading: 1. The male lead has an ex-girlfriend. I've heard some people mind, so consider this a warning. 2. The characters in this story aren't based on real people. Any resemblance is purely coincidental. 3. The story involves two variety shows: one about travel and one about music, with formats similar to The Voice of China and The Battle of the Bands. The travel show gets a little more page time, and the music show a little less. 4. The author is terrible at coming up with names. If you're interested, I recommend adding the story to your reading list, since I might change the title at any time before it's finished. The story is being drafted. Unless something unexpected happens, it'll be my main project in the second half of 2019. Theme:
Tags
- ThemeEastern Fanfiction
- POVFemale Lead
- Age13+
- AccessFree
- Childhood Sweethearts
- Lighthearted
- Magical Fantasy
- Time Travel
- Tutor
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This housekeeper is also funny. He actually asked the heroine to persist and give him another chance. It was so funny. I think this chapter is just making excuses for the hero. It has been six years. Even though he is an aloof Yun, he has to have some brains. Isn't it tiring for girls? The filters of anime male gods after so many years should be realistic. Come on, I think as girls, we all like Hibari Kyouya when we read this book. At first, because it was him, I thought it was okay to endure it. Good guy, if the heroine still has this virtue when she is thirty, it would be speechless, and the setting of girls does not need to be so humble emotionally.
I was speechless. In the end, it felt like a forced conflict. I would say that falling in love caused the heroine's IQ to plummet. After dating for five or six years, the two of them have no physical needs, not even holding hands and kissing. So what have they been doing these past few years, playing house? Even if Brother Que is a god and has no desire, I don't believe that Brother Que, who the heroine likes first, doesn't have the desire for intimate contact. Based on their good feelings, if she takes the initiative, I don't believe that Brother Que will refuse. But she insisted on Brother Que taking the initiative. Regarding this point, after knowing each other for more than ten or twenty years, the heroine doesn't know what kind of character Brother Que is, and she may have to wait until the next life for him to take the initiative to date and give gifts. Isn't this asking for trouble? If you want a boyfriend who understands romance, why should you look for Brother Que? Which handsome guy in Vongola doesn't know better than Brother Que. If you want a gift, just tell him. If you want to date, let him spend time with you. If you like him, just kiss him. Whether he has time to respond to you is another matter. How can he know your needs if you don't tell him. From the looks of it, it's not as if the heroine doesn't know how to teach Brother Que how to take care of himself. The Brother Que she pursues probably doesn't care about face, but he flinches and is dumbfounded when it comes to close contact. I quite liked the plot before the cannon fodder female partner appeared at the end. Whether it was the heroine's gentle black character, the foreshadowing related to the dead flames, or the emotional line that started with Brother Que getting what he wanted, there was nothing wrong with it. It's the last paragraph that I just can't help but complain about.
Hi, the writing is very good. After reading the whole article, I felt angry at the same time and felt that the characters were very right and natural. Readers don't have to sincerely dispel mines. It's just that everyone's viewing angle is different. Obviously Skylark is this kind of character. She needs the Virgin (no derogatory meaning) pure love and God of War to love "Skylarks". The heroine thinks that she is already in love, why don't you treat me well at all? Although she is over the top, she is a sweet and sweet girl who often falls in love and gets hurt again and again. Who doesn't have a headache when she touches Skylark? This ending is pretty good. Everyone felt that it was natural before. It was because Yinzi regarded Hibari as a friend. Hibari had such a bad temper. If Yinzi had always regarded him as a friend and got together with other people, changing their familiar way of getting along, Hibari might really be able to explode. It would not necessarily bite and kill the people Yinzi liked. He would do whatever he wants. It feels like Hibari's possessiveness is expressed in this subtle way. It's more like he is really just a big cat raised by Neko. He has a strong sense of inhumanity (no derogatory meaning). You can't ask your cat owner to love you like a lover.
It feels like writing Hibari as a scumbag. Why is there a female rivalry? It's best if there is no one else. Hibari almost lost his voice several times. Can't he understand the importance of his voice? Can't he understand his own feelings? Skylark should respond to his confession. The rest can be written as daily life after marriage. Why write a female partner hanging around the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is indifferent and does not care about the female protagonist to irritate the readers?
It's rare to see an article that writes about Skylark's emotions in such a vivid and natural way. In my opinion, Skylark's feelings should be indifferent, flowing slowly, and no need to say anything. The contradiction between Skylark's arrogance and gentleness (?) Is very well written (of course these two characteristics are just my personal opinions), without any OOC feeling! The shaping of the sound is also very vivid. Yinzi on the emotional line has the heartbeat of a girl, with contradictions and hesitations. She is also decisive and resolute in dealing with emotional failures, reflecting Yinzi's own independence and maturity. On the plot line, Yinzi is also full of charm. She has the gentleness and strength of Dasora, and the persistence and seriousness of Suyin. She deserves to be called a member of the Sawada family. They are all such lovely and gentle beings. It was so touching that the two of them could be together. As a proud Yun, Hibari finally chooses Yinzi as a place of sustenance [actually I don't know how to describe this place, I can't help crying], and Yinzi must be [strong] externally, and can show all her shortcomings and weaknesses in front of Hibari without reservation. I have mentioned in the article more than once that when Yinzi is a "sister" and other identities, she must be "strong". This is actually very tiring. Hug our lovely Yinzi. Hibari and Yinzi are not perfect people, but they are the only ones who can perfectly complement each other. To be honest, I especially liked Skylark's "step by step" at the end, which made the girl's heart explode. It's so easy to say that one step at a time is necessary for falling in love. Hahahahaha. I feel that Yunque is really reserved these years and has never done anything. Hahahaha, thank you for your hard work. However, Skylark directly completed all the necessary love tasks in one day and even hit a home run. The operation of obtaining the certificate the next day is really worthy of Skylark's superb mobility, hahahaha Finally, I am very grateful for allowing me to see such a beautiful story. The process of creation must have been full of tangles and troubles, but it is also indispensable that the article takes shape in my own hands step by step, and the sense of accomplishment when readers carefully comment on it. [Actually, I have also experienced this contradictory feeling hahahaha] Finally, let me complain a little. In fact, I was halfway through commenting, but accidentally pressed on a blank space, and the comment bar shrank back. When I clicked on it again, it all cleared without leaving a draft for me. JJ, what's wrong with you?
Everything else was good, but the little red book from the Civil Affairs Bureau really impressed me. . . Um. . . Maybe my knowledge is incomplete? Isn't it necessary to go to the court to sign a marriage certificate when getting married in Japan? . . . . . .
The emotional line is written very naturally, like a skylark, not as blazing as fire, but as light as water, blending into life, flowing slowly. The plot line is not so smooth, and there is a moment of confusion. (Personal feeling)
How should I put it, now that Neko is deeply invested in her feelings, if she wants to abuse Hibari, she must first abuse the heroine. It's better not to give it up
It's a little different from the Skylark I understand, but it doesn't feel OOC. Thank you for your hard work, let us conduct a reading comprehension of Skylark from another direction.
. . . . Floating clouds, you can only watch them from a distance