Su's writing style is very clean and the atmosphere is very refreshing. It's not like many people who write ancient style of writing who show off or pretend to be awesome. It makes me tremble when I read it. I still like it very much.
I have read several of Su's short stories, and I still like this one the best. The structure and atmosphere are both refreshing and refreshing. Keep it up. Su's writing skills are very good. Please continue to work hard in the future~
PS: I want to make a digression: The romantic boy has so many sets of clothes... Could it be that he changed them just to meet the storyteller... (Floated by PIA)
After reading it, I felt very much that a story like this is really suitable for a short story.
I read it again, and it turned out that it is best to just stop at this point. A long story will lose its taste... Author's reply:
Yes, I also feel that I haven't had this feeling after writing for too long.
Laugh, and I am a long-term incompetent party!
I couldn't find any article in the small transparent post, and finally I remembered that I can stop all the poisons, hehe
At first I only watched a clip and I was so cute with the narrative style. Now that I have read the full text, I am still very cute~
Although this is a short article, I feel that this should be a door to a huge story...
Why Mao didn't write "long" is because I'm too lazy to write or I haven't thought about it = =+
It feels pretty good, pretty good. Story within story
What I once believed in is no longer true, what I once loved deeply has long since vanished into ashes, and the vivid smile in the past has faded in the day-to-day narration, so lonely.
I have read all three short Danmei articles, and I feel that they can be turned into a longer one. I wonder if you have such plans. Looking forward to it... Author's reply:
Make it a long story. A long story is really frustrating for me...
Maybe I'm not very good at writing long stories, lol
Found it by accident, well written
You must have seen Gintama!!!!
Such a heartwarming article!! 1 Likes it, and 5 all the adult articles!! Author's reply:
The girl's reply saved my lonely little heart...
Laugh, I've seen Gintama, I'm a die-hard Gintama >___<
Su's writing style is very clean and the atmosphere is very refreshing. It's not like many people who write ancient style of writing who show off or pretend to be awesome. It makes me tremble when I read it. I still like it very much. I have read several of Su's short stories, and I still like this one the best. The structure and atmosphere are both refreshing and refreshing. Keep it up. Su's writing skills are very good. Please continue to work hard in the future~ PS: I want to make a digression: The romantic boy has so many sets of clothes... Could it be that he changed them just to meet the storyteller... (Floated by PIA)
After reading it, I felt very much that a story like this is really suitable for a short story.
I read it again, and it turned out that it is best to just stop at this point. A long story will lose its taste... Author's reply: Yes, I also feel that I haven't had this feeling after writing for too long. Laugh, and I am a long-term incompetent party!
I couldn't find any article in the small transparent post, and finally I remembered that I can stop all the poisons, hehe At first I only watched a clip and I was so cute with the narrative style. Now that I have read the full text, I am still very cute~ Although this is a short article, I feel that this should be a door to a huge story... Why Mao didn't write "long" is because I'm too lazy to write or I haven't thought about it = =+
It feels pretty good, pretty good. Story within story
What I once believed in is no longer true, what I once loved deeply has long since vanished into ashes, and the vivid smile in the past has faded in the day-to-day narration, so lonely.
I have read all three short Danmei articles, and I feel that they can be turned into a longer one. I wonder if you have such plans. Looking forward to it... Author's reply: Make it a long story. A long story is really frustrating for me... Maybe I'm not very good at writing long stories, lol
Found it by accident, well written
You must have seen Gintama!!!! Such a heartwarming article!! 1 Likes it, and 5 all the adult articles!! Author's reply: The girl's reply saved my lonely little heart... Laugh, I've seen Gintama, I'm a die-hard Gintama >___<