Stories that may or may not happen
Lu Xiaoshou's proposition composition for winter essay competition
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Well, there's nothing wrong with the Elf text, I just want to adjust it... I'm internally injured from holding it in all this time... OTZ
Intention:
Reader comments
I want to say something, but I don't know what to say or how to say it.
I always feel that this article seems familiar, so I'll just count it as a re-read. When I was rereading it, I was killing monsters on some other forum while I was reading it. This is my deliberate absent-mindedness. I know subconsciously that the ending of the article will probably not be very good, so I deliberately don't want to get too involved. Unfortunately, it still failed. I can only say that the adult's writing style is too vicious, leaving people with nowhere to hide. Such a story could have been written in a more thrilling way, but the master kept telling it slowly in a light tone. There is a hint of indifference, but also an irresistible sadness. It's really cruel to kill someone so inadvertently and invisible.
I like this story very much. The description of emotions is sideways from beginning to end, leaving readers with some hindsight. Roger's death, Neil's awakening. In fact, the setting is a bit cliche, but due to the adults' writing skills, it only makes people feel sentimental. What is sad is not the parting caused by death, but that everything is still unclear when parting. There was no time to say what should be said, and the feelings that should be realized were still confused. I can't help but give hope to something as futile as reincarnation. Hope death is not their final outcome. Author's reply:
I have to say, dear Nai's comments make me very happy.
It turns out that I can also write articles that make people feel sad.
So relieved
68 Has opened a new trap. Come and spread flowers~~~
Elf literature must not be cheated~~~~~~
I. . . Yes. . . 9. Boundary. . Printmaker. . Ye Feihua, I hope so. . Reprint. . This is for adults. . . Arts.
Adults are welcome to come and play.
Author's reply:
Can... Transfer....
Why so many periods? = =?
Smiling with bared teeth.
Because I've been blocked.
Only Jiang Zi can make it come out. ^_^Author's reply:
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Thank you for your hard work
Since you agree with me, you can send me a link. . Tie. . Square. . Mode. . ?
Arrange for me to register for you, thank you
Me (Q: 478610485)
..... I said why are you missing...
It's really weird. . .
Don't want! Why is this happening? It hurts so much
I absolutely feel so uncomfortable. . So uncomfortable. .
Why does something unexpected happen when we obviously want to be happy! ! ! Hate!
Be is the most annoying thing
I like your articles very much. I have read all of them.
I don't know why, but I always prefer tragedy. Maybe it's because there are too many HE stories in Danmeili. In fact, tragedy is more beautiful.
I like short stories like this the most~~~Come on~~~
I wanted to lament that all life is miserable, but for some reason I came up with the sentence "Every family has sutras that are difficult to recite." Embarrassed
[Angry] Dear, what do you mean? Um? I said you were sexually abusive and you were actually happy? Still happy? Um?
I love your heart. . .
I'll pat you, pat you, and I'll pat you! . . .
It's actually satisfying to torture us! Author's reply:
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Because I am a novice sweet writer... I feel so accomplished if I can write something quite sad (star eyes)
Orz... Okay. . Honey, you win. I think your fallacy is convincing. . . But your little white text is very cute~ As a person who reads sadistic stories, I was killed in it. . .
Also, I've been curious. . Dear, what are your criteria for deciding whether to reply? It seems that I called you over there from the butterfly, but you didn't reply, and I called you over here, my dear, but you did reply. .
[Surprised] My dear, what are you? ? The one behind the L? ?
Sweat. . Did I say something that I shouldn't have said? . Embarrassing. . . Author's reply:
= =......
To a certain extent, I will automatically ignore reminders...
He suspected that I was M... So he came over and fucked me = =+
Tsk tsk tsk~ My dear, if you want to TJ me, this kind of momentum is not enough. . .
No matter how you look at it, it looks like a fake S and a real M. . . By the way, I have always suspected that those who write novice articles are all Mr. 0. . . Have you ever met Mr. S?
Cough cough cough. Sorry, I said something I shouldn't have said again. . .
Um. . It feels very subtle, having such a collapsed chat under such a BE article. . .
OTL...
Forgot to rate. . I'm embarrassed...
Every tragedy is complete - -, but why is it so complete? . I want to come back to life. . .
Everyone has a story. And because of everyone's persistence in love, all tragedies are caused.
555555555…
Why didn't I see the extra episode last time? I caught up on it today! Hey, I felt so uncomfortable after reading it. Could it be that I have too many emotions? ! ! Why, why don't you understand until you lose it! ! ! It seems that ignorance is also a kind of happiness! At least the living ones won't suffer!
He understood so late...
Do you really not plan to complete your ambition? If I could make an ambition, I would really die without any regrets! ! ! In addition! Can you ask me for help on Weibo?
Good for abuse, Sang Xin, nice writing, Sang Xin
Damn it, why did you understand it so late? Why couldn't you wake up earlier? Even if you are destined to die, you must let him have no regrets. I cried to death.
Lin Da, please don't cheat on my brother's article. Please come back and update it soon. Come on Lin Da, I will always support Lin Da
It was very sad after reading it. . . I still like to watch relaxed HE. . . Life is cruel enough. . .
I want to say something, but I don't know what to say or how to say it. I always feel that this article seems familiar, so I'll just count it as a re-read. When I was rereading it, I was killing monsters on some other forum while I was reading it. This is my deliberate absent-mindedness. I know subconsciously that the ending of the article will probably not be very good, so I deliberately don't want to get too involved. Unfortunately, it still failed. I can only say that the adult's writing style is too vicious, leaving people with nowhere to hide. Such a story could have been written in a more thrilling way, but the master kept telling it slowly in a light tone. There is a hint of indifference, but also an irresistible sadness. It's really cruel to kill someone so inadvertently and invisible. I like this story very much. The description of emotions is sideways from beginning to end, leaving readers with some hindsight. Roger's death, Neil's awakening. In fact, the setting is a bit cliche, but due to the adults' writing skills, it only makes people feel sentimental. What is sad is not the parting caused by death, but that everything is still unclear when parting. There was no time to say what should be said, and the feelings that should be realized were still confused. I can't help but give hope to something as futile as reincarnation. Hope death is not their final outcome. Author's reply: I have to say, dear Nai's comments make me very happy. It turns out that I can also write articles that make people feel sad. So relieved
68 Has opened a new trap. Come and spread flowers~~~ Elf literature must not be cheated~~~~~~
I. . . Yes. . . 9. Boundary. . Printmaker. . Ye Feihua, I hope so. . Reprint. . This is for adults. . . Arts. Adults are welcome to come and play. Author's reply: Can... Transfer.... Why so many periods? = =?
Smiling with bared teeth. Because I've been blocked. Only Jiang Zi can make it come out. ^_^Author's reply: = =||| Thank you for your hard work
Since you agree with me, you can send me a link. . Tie. . Square. . Mode. . ? Arrange for me to register for you, thank you Me (Q: 478610485)
..... I said why are you missing...
It's really weird. . .
Don't want! Why is this happening? It hurts so much
I absolutely feel so uncomfortable. . So uncomfortable. .
Why does something unexpected happen when we obviously want to be happy! ! ! Hate!
Be is the most annoying thing
I like your articles very much. I have read all of them. I don't know why, but I always prefer tragedy. Maybe it's because there are too many HE stories in Danmeili. In fact, tragedy is more beautiful. I like short stories like this the most~~~Come on~~~
I wanted to lament that all life is miserable, but for some reason I came up with the sentence "Every family has sutras that are difficult to recite." Embarrassed
[Angry] Dear, what do you mean? Um? I said you were sexually abusive and you were actually happy? Still happy? Um? I love your heart. . . I'll pat you, pat you, and I'll pat you! . . . It's actually satisfying to torture us! Author's reply: = =||| Because I am a novice sweet writer... I feel so accomplished if I can write something quite sad (star eyes)
Orz... Okay. . Honey, you win. I think your fallacy is convincing. . . But your little white text is very cute~ As a person who reads sadistic stories, I was killed in it. . . Also, I've been curious. . Dear, what are your criteria for deciding whether to reply? It seems that I called you over there from the butterfly, but you didn't reply, and I called you over here, my dear, but you did reply. . [Surprised] My dear, what are you? ? The one behind the L? ? Sweat. . Did I say something that I shouldn't have said? . Embarrassing. . . Author's reply: = =...... To a certain extent, I will automatically ignore reminders... He suspected that I was M... So he came over and fucked me = =+
Tsk tsk tsk~ My dear, if you want to TJ me, this kind of momentum is not enough. . . No matter how you look at it, it looks like a fake S and a real M. . . By the way, I have always suspected that those who write novice articles are all Mr. 0. . . Have you ever met Mr. S? Cough cough cough. Sorry, I said something I shouldn't have said again. . . Um. . It feels very subtle, having such a collapsed chat under such a BE article. . . OTL...
Forgot to rate. . I'm embarrassed...
Every tragedy is complete - -, but why is it so complete? . I want to come back to life. . .
Everyone has a story. And because of everyone's persistence in love, all tragedies are caused.
555555555…
Why didn't I see the extra episode last time? I caught up on it today! Hey, I felt so uncomfortable after reading it. Could it be that I have too many emotions? ! ! Why, why don't you understand until you lose it! ! ! It seems that ignorance is also a kind of happiness! At least the living ones won't suffer!
He understood so late...
Do you really not plan to complete your ambition? If I could make an ambition, I would really die without any regrets! ! ! In addition! Can you ask me for help on Weibo?
Good for abuse, Sang Xin, nice writing, Sang Xin
Damn it, why did you understand it so late? Why couldn't you wake up earlier? Even if you are destined to die, you must let him have no regrets. I cried to death.
Lin Da, please don't cheat on my brother's article. Please come back and update it soon. Come on Lin Da, I will always support Lin Da
It was very sad after reading it. . . I still like to watch relaxed HE. . . Life is cruel enough. . .
It's not just death that separates you