
That Down-and-Out Nobody
那个丧气小扑街
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 101k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
73Chapters
522Favorites
10.0Score
128Nutrient gifts
1.7kClicks per chapter
184Comments
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To summarize my personal opinions: 1. Huanhuan, one of the heroines, is a silly girl, which is okay, but her background is that she grew up in an orphanage, which is a bit inconsistent. It is impossible for an ordinary family of two or more children to be so harmonious and raise such unscrupulous children, because there will always be conflicts between children. There is always a preference between parents, so children will instinctively feel what is good for them and learn to watch what is going on, not to mention an orphanage where many children live in complex living environments; 2 The other heroine, Huo Xiao, is too straight in character, with poor thinking and behavior, not very high emotional intelligence, and sometimes behavioral methods. It's very naive, which makes people a little confused about how she does business (a common problem of former romance CEOs), but later after she cooperated with Lin Yin to invest, she performed well. It can be seen that her talent is probably all in business. Another point is that she uses swear words. Her character setting is obviously that of the upper class. Damn this swear word. This is often said by gangsters... The character of a straight man is probably caused by his family and upbringing environment. It can be understood by different people, but hiding his gender and dating a straight woman is really a scumbag, especially a scumbag. The 3 female supporting characters all have a good impression of Huanhuan, some like it but give up when it is difficult, and some like it but don't know it (Huo Yan is not included). To sum up, this film falls a bit into the old routine of romantic CEO stories that were popular in the past few years. However, it is still quite good without too much nonsense. Some parts are very eye-catching. At the beginning, when they admit the wrong gender and fall in love, Huo Shadiao chases his wife in the crematorium without realizing it, and Huan Huan's mentality and career changes are all great. , Game-playing scenes and dialogues (the side depicts Huan Huan's gaming talent and the relaxed atmosphere of playing games with friends, as well as Huo's shortcomings...), Etc., Generally speaking, it is not bad, and it can be read as a cool article. There is a lot of room for improvement and potential, keep up the good work~~
The Bai family's positioning of Huo Xiao is quite accurate.
Lin Ying said that the Huo family's parents doted on Huo Xiao?? But I see why this is not the case in the previous chapters.
Although I bought them all, I thought about it and let it go. Any of the female characters in this article are better than Huo Xiao. It is completely possible to write a story about meeting, knowing and falling in love, with some misunderstandings and unexpected family resistance in the middle. You can have a delicate and long-term relationship with Lin Ying, and you and Bai Feng can bicker with each other. Both pairs are very watchable, police officer In the army, Huo Yan was still too young, so she could only pass... This story is really no different from the routines of romance novels when I was in high school. However, there is no such thing as pregnancy and abortion. The plot is a bit old... I have already saved the column. I will read it if there are good works in the future. I hope it will get better and better. Spread the flowers~
... Are you sure that checking someone's address and phone number so casually and then going to find them are not just to increase your negative score?
If Huanhuan's straight woman is straight in sexual orientation, then Huo Xiao's straight man is straight as a straight man. It is completely a male way of thinking. However, considering that there are thousands of people with different personalities, it is not impossible for a girl to have such a personality, so I still accept this character. Maybe it's because I used to write romances, so The character of one of the female protagonists is still a bit closer to that of a man, and she also uses a lot of swear words (this role is set for upper-class corporate people), and it is a curse word that is commonly used by men. Many girls will not use this damn sentence (except for the little gangster girls) [A little guess, I will accept a big refutation]
The modern fast-traveling entertainment industry is all about cultivating immortals, but the ancient ones are no longer pursued. Boss Ba doesn't like watching them very much. He has had enough of the poison of mindless romance. Boss Lily just forgets it. He doesn't like Stockholm and the gender-transformed male CEO. Of course, if it's just his identity, he is the boss. If you want to cut it, you can consider it. I have also read two books so far. The emotional writing is quite delicate. The description of workplace battles is not as long as the emotional one, but it is also quite clear. As for the subject matter, I have a lot to eat. As long as it can poke me, I will read anything.
Among the female supporting characters currently appearing, any one of them would be good to be with Huanhuan, including Huo Yan
Seeing this, I thought about a question, can children who grow up in orphanages really be so silly and sweet? Children from ordinary families can still observe words and emotions, and they will not grow up to be so silly and sweet as long as they are not particularly pampered. Huan Huan can live so smoothly in life to such an old age. The role of the heroine's aura is quite powerful.