Reborn: The Business Tycoon's Point of No Return

Damn, there are some language problems in your description of the seriousness of Gong's illness in the first chapter. It's not a grammatical problem, but it's too colloquial. "The intestines are almost stuck together" and "even the entire abdominal cavity" (there are some discrepancies in details, I remember it's not It's so clear, sorry ≥≤) it's so emmm... I hope you can make some changes, such as changing "even the entire abdominal cavity" to "even serious enough that the entire abdominal cavity is bleeding." I personally think it is more appropriate.

Collected, cheers (???_??)?

I am not a medical professional, but the description in the first picture seems a bit inconsistent. Is such a dangerous patient lying alone? Is it true that there is blood in the stomach and there is no way to save it?

Long time no see I've been under a lot of pressure lately. I hope you will be happy tomorrow

I am still immersed in the sweet dream that I had three times a day...

Hahahahahahaha This article is the most enjoyable update I have read

Very interesting, I want to know how it will develop next