Red Luan Star, Turn Around!

It looks good from the front, but it also feels like a Mary Sue, you listen to my explanation, but I don't listen, I don't listen. The reason behind why the heroine doesn't like the hero is very confusing. At one moment, it feels like the heroine said she doesn't love him just to reassure the hero. At another moment, it feels like it's because of the heroine's martial arts practice. At another moment, it feels like the heroine just doesn't love him anymore. The male protagonist also changed too quickly. It's a feeling that leaves me scratching my head. The characters of the second and third male characters are quite comfortable, and the pacing at the beginning is also good. However, later on, the attitude of the heroine after discovering that she is a girl is a bit baffling. I feel that it would be better if there is more plot foreshadowing in the early stage. In short, the whole story line still feels smooth, but many points are too sudden and the male protagonist's setting is not established.

I'm still upset and feel aggrieved

Since there was a connection, Mr. Lu was really awkward after the reunion.

Hey, I quite like Wei Yinchen.

How do you like Mr. Wei?

To be honest, I'm still thinking about that idiot who peed in Mr. Deer's courtyard.

I have read it a long time ago, and I have read it several times in the past few years. I just don't know why. When I read this article, I feel sour and bitter. When I don't know what to read, I will turn it out and read it again. The writing style is a bit immature, but it does not prevent it from being an overall good-looking article. Especially the psychological description of the heroine's early pursuit of the hero is very delicate.

I also like Mr. Wei and Mr. Shen very much

This book is really well written. [I have finished reading it, and I will tell you my true feelings. A little spoiler may cause discomfort] Most of the novels on the Green River bg gold list are too exaggerated now, and the supporting characters have no souls. It is obvious that every word and action is to advance the protagonist's emotional line, like a machine for assisting without emotion. I especially admire the author, who slowly advances the writing point by point. It is written meticulously and naturally. Many plots have foreshadowings. The foreshadowings laid in the past are all revealed at the right time. It does not make people feel that it happened a long time ago, and it also inherits the plot below. For example, in the life and death Gu part, the mother Gu is injured and the child Gu is weak. The mother Gu dies and the child Gu follows. Hua Xunjiu thought that it was the child Gu that Lu Zhaochu introduced into his body. In fact, on the contrary, Lu Zhaochu was the child Gu. From then on, life followed Hua Xunjiu. This foreshadowing was naturally and reasonably pointed out through the Miaojiang Gu King in the chapter when the main plot branch moved forward. There are many outstanding things in the whole text, and there are also many small highlights. The plot is really smooth. It is like the natural growth of a tree. The trunk grows upward and is decorated with small leaves. It completes the entire plot in a timely manner. No! Have! Hold back! Wrong! Feel . What I have to say, and what makes the article even better, is that the characters other than the male and female protagonists are also very soulful! They all have their own plots. I cried because I was so happy that I finally found a novel in which the non-male and female protagonists are not emotionless support machines whose words and deeds revolve around the protagonist all day long. It's very, very, very good. Except for the rushed ending, it's good to have a side story. Sisters who are getting irritated in the book world can also read it. It's a strong recommendation, and the writing is definitely not mentally retarded.

Don't match up with Xiao Yulang. Although I can't bear to let him go, I just want him to miss Huahua all his life.