
Got a Story. Want to Hear It?
有个故事你听不听
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1k Words
- Genre
- No CP
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
3Favorites
395Clicks per chapter
2Comments
More by this author
Reader comments 2
Translated by Google Translate



You have a big bald head. You must be a person who writes frequently. Your writing style is very concise. I like this article, but there is one issue that I am curious about. The time difference between the flashbacks seems not very clear, which can easily lead to confusion. I'd rather see you write a short story than a long one. Good luck.
The writing is awesome! You seem to have two personalities