My Husband Is Good at Everything

I feel that Gong is too favored by Shou. It is okay to describe Gong's liking for Shou, but if all the words are devoted to this kind of emotion, it will easily give readers an unbalanced feeling. That is, Shou's love for Gong is very superficial, because you have only written about how Gong can treat Shou well.

The writing of Gong is a bit confusing. I prefer to watch Shou take the initiative to do this kind of thing and protect Gong afterwards.

Ah? No more??? The ending ends too quickly

The writing is a bit verbose, so keep up the good work. I hope your writing will get better and better.

Ordinary life is very happy. There is no happiness in reality. I can only read the happiness in books. It is also a kind of happiness for me. Thank you author.

The author actually writes very well. Although the writing style always follows the two protagonists, the logic is also very smooth, and it feels like a very sweet daily story. But next time the author can try to make the text in larger brackets, so that the whole article will read better. For example, in this article, you can occasionally write about the pair of younger brothers, and you can also describe how the people in the village are jealous of the protagonist and them. Although the protagonist doesn't care, it would still be a better description. You can also describe some of the interactions between the protagonist and the villagers. No matter what, the people of the same village always look up but never look down. If you write it this way, the entire article will read differently. My personal opinion, if you don't like it, just pretend you didn't see it.

The protagonist's name is confused in many chapters. Should the author find time to change it?

Old people often say that having a child depends on fate. When fate comes, it will come naturally

Are glutinous rice balls also salty? I haven't eaten it yet!

There was once a big debate about sweet and salty tofu nao