When the Wind Rises and Clouds Unfurl (Yuewei Pavilion)

Very nice article, thank you very much.

I finished reading it in one sitting~it's pretty good~

The fighting scenes are really cool! ! ! Wa supports you!

One chapter is so long, it's so comfortable to read.

Read all the way~ I can't help but write a few more words when I see this. First of all, I want to say that Qianmei's writing is very smooth and flowing, and you can feel that way while reading it. It follows a very orthodox martial arts writing style, and there is no daughterly attitude involved. However, although the article is fluent, it is too smooth like a stream flowing in the plains, without any ups and downs. It feels a little too bland. I don't know what kind of characters Qianmei wants to portray Ziyao and Shu Jing into. At least the Shu Jing I saw didn't leave a very deep impression on me. In fact, looking at this, it seems that the real villain has not officially appeared yet. It seems confusing, but it makes people feel a little confused. It's good to have suspense, but too much suspense will make people confused. It is best to have outstanding characters in martial arts stories, whether they are positive or negative, but Ziyao and Shu Jing are both peaceful. As for the villain, the only one I have an impression of is Master Ning, and I don't know if he is the villain yet. I hope Qianmeida can portray the characters more prominently and speed up the pace of the entire article. Qianmeida's writing is quite good overall, but it lacks any highlights. If it can be changed, it will definitely look better. The above is purely the humble opinion of a 19-year-old. I hope Qianmei won't be offended.

How did Ye Ying find it? This note is written as if it was picked up on the street. It is too simple.

Clap your claws~Finally there is new progress~

Seeing this, I still don't understand what has happened and what will happen. I just want to complain. Slowly, slowly.

I just feel like it's been a long walk to reach Taihu Lake~

"Ling Dang, please put this away carefully, and be careful not to let Xiao Xiao change your mind." Who is Xiao Xiao? Catching bugs