[Ashes of Love Fanfiction] Runyu X Yuanxi

Woohoo, this is the ending for a normal person in my mind. Across the sea of ​​​​blood and hatred, it is already very good for people who love each other to forget each other in the world, but to insist on being together is simply stupid.

I really don't like the outlook of the protagonist group, and it has to be related to the water god. The water god is really bad. The heroine has such a fucking background that she is so blind to look at the water god.

When I saw Chapter 40, I couldn't stand it any longer, so I turned to the end to leave a message. Frankly speaking, in my opinion, 70% of the content of this book is quite good, but one big problem is that the character creation has failed somewhat, which in my opinion is a very serious problem. After reading the first few chapters, the heroine gave me the impression of a decisive, cold, arrogant and relatively rational superior. But, author, as soon as you wrote about the relationship between the male and female protagonists, she instantly became silly and sweet. Especially when we first met by the Tianhe River, she was just a simple and lively little girl. She didn't blush when seeing the male, which was really OOC. I understand that the author may want to make the male and female protagonists relatively "loving", but when I actually read this, I felt obvious discomfort. To be honest, the character of the female protagonist, Emperor Fengdu, is very impressive. She is strong in terms of force and power, and the heroine's role as protector of her husband sounds very domineering. However, the character design really does not stand up. The more I watch the end, the less I remember that she is the lord of the underworld who is in charge of life and death. I can only remember that she is still Emperor Fengdu when she is describing how to discipline her subordinates. As a person who has read online literature for decades, I am a complete fan of plot. For me, a good novel should have a complete (preferably novel) story framework, relatively three-dimensional characters and a logical and smooth storyline. All three are indispensable. The logical flow here means that not only the development of the storyline itself must be logical, but more importantly, the incident plot must conform to the character image. From this point of view, this article may not be in line with the character setting. I forgot where I saw a video teaching how to shape a character. It said something like this: "I have a person here who has such an identity (character). What kind of plot should I use to highlight this character? In this plot, what kind of language, action, demeanor, and description should I use to support the character." This article feels that the female protagonist is a bit OOC, and the influence of the male protagonist is relatively flat. Emmm... It's a bit of a pity, it would have been better if the character development was better. Ps: The identity of the heroine as the daughter of the water god feels completely useless. The status of Emperor Fengdu is already high enough. I don't understand why it is designed like this, so that there will be less obstacles for the male and female protagonists to get married? Maybe it's because Luo Lin is a scumbag of another level in my opinion, and he doesn't quite fit this setting.

Highly carbonated and feels modern

What kind of bastard is this Jin Mi? Can the heroine stop being so nice to her? This is disgusting.

Fortunately, I didn't watch Xiangmi. It's okay if I don't watch such a TV series that ruins my outlook! He actually let go of the hatred of killing his biological mother, biological father, and adoptive mother for the sake of love! I absolutely can't, it's already good if I don't kill him!

No matter who writes the fanfic, I think Jin Mi is stupid! What to do! ?

The character Runyu is so miserable, why do some people still say that Runyu is the only one loved by the screenwriter? Fall in love and kill each other?

After reading Yanyou's description, I felt a lot of emotion. Some people praised him while watching the show, but then I thought about some of his actions that people disagreed with. For example, when he went to heaven to cause trouble and was caught, and then he ran away with the Mouse Fairy, why did he go to Jin Mi at that time, but he was caught. The Mouse Fairy sacrificed himself to save him, hoping that he would help Suli in the future. However, he forgot all about the Mouse Fairy afterwards, did not protect Suli, and later did not help Runyu. , It feels like he is more devoted to Jin Mi.

Finally, Jin Mi has three views, which is so rare.