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After so many years, it's time to practice again?????
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Simple copywriting:
Why are there two hearts in the jar? !
Was it a love killing, a vendetta, or a sadistic killing? !
What's the conspiracy behind this? !
What is the relationship between the two hearts?
Properties:
Main attack, flashback, pure love Shuangjie 1v1, Qiangqiang, oe, overhead, a little Machiavellian, emotional plot is 50/50
The general of our dynasty attacks vs. The enemy's current proton, General Yuan receives
Both of them have strong personalities, are similar in age and are young. They seem to have nothing to do with each other but are actually quite fatalistic.
A match made in heaven! It's destined!
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Text text:
There is a dilapidated general's mansion on the outskirts of the original Gyeonggi Province. Buried inside is a jar containing the hearts of General Shen and his wife, who were both famous at the end of the dynasty.
"Grandma, are the rumors true?"
A young boy asked curiously.
"Haha, it's a long story! Rather than rumors, I want to tell you the story of these two people. I'm telling you privately and don't tell anyone else. The story was told to me by General Shen himself back then, and I'll tell it to you now."
"At that time, my grandmother was about the same age as you. One day when I came to the general's mansion, I couldn't bear my curiosity and went in. Unexpectedly, I happened to run into General Shen holding a heart jar..."
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Random thoughts:
I'm so cute and rolling. Please leave comments and collect them from readers, little angels.
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Fei Niwu is here to perform a fake corpse trick for everyone!
It was so cold that I didn't even have to wear clothes when I climbed out of the tomb.
In this cold world, only reader Little Angel's collection and comments made me feel the meaning of corpse fraud!
Writing is not easy, and hair loss is time-consuming and labor-intensive, but the support from the little angels is what keeps me going!
Explain it here:
Most of the background settings refer to the Song Dynasty. If there are any discrepancies, please do not take it seriously. The language of qwq is also more colloquial + vernacular.
All in all, it's just that Fei Xianwu came up with his idea in a moment of enthusiasm, and everyone will be happy to see it!
Although it focuses on the perspective, it has little impact on the story.
(Double perspective is still the most common in the middle and later stages~)
Well, probably with some yandere.
Intention: I just want to lament the impermanence of the world. The so-called tragedy is just tearing beautiful things into pieces for people to see. How can reality be as beautiful as those sweet little novels? Life is full of joys, sorrows and joys. Only when all four tastes are present is life!
Reader comments
After reading a few chapters, I have some minor questions that I would like to address.
The writing is pretty good, generally good.
The writing seems very delicate, I like it very much
However, I feel that some parts of the plot are too deliberate, the character descriptions are not clear enough, some characters are not very prominent, and there are some places that made me feel a little bit uneasy, such as the dialogue of the characters, sometimes some more modern words suddenly appear.
There are a lot of dialogues. In fact, your description of the environment is quite good. At least I am not good at it at all, but I can still tell that I am not very skilled in using it (I'm sorry!! I didn't mean to say that). I still need to hone my artistic conception rendering.
In the end, overall, you are awesome! I hope you can be better! ! You must work hard~ The author is great~
The future is promising~
The writing is really good, and my wife is great! I skipped watching it just because it was BE. I was too afraid of being abused. Madam, keep up the good work!
After reading a few chapters, I have some minor questions that I would like to address. The writing is pretty good, generally good. The writing seems very delicate, I like it very much However, I feel that some parts of the plot are too deliberate, the character descriptions are not clear enough, some characters are not very prominent, and there are some places that made me feel a little bit uneasy, such as the dialogue of the characters, sometimes some more modern words suddenly appear. There are a lot of dialogues. In fact, your description of the environment is quite good. At least I am not good at it at all, but I can still tell that I am not very skilled in using it (I'm sorry!! I didn't mean to say that). I still need to hone my artistic conception rendering. In the end, overall, you are awesome! I hope you can be better! ! You must work hard~ The author is great~ The future is promising~
The writing is really good, and my wife is great! I skipped watching it just because it was BE. I was too afraid of being abused. Madam, keep up the good work!