The Apocalypse Good Samaritan Shopping System

Since this is a writing practice for Da Da, I would like to make some suggestions for Da Da: 1. Write an article, usually find the right topic, eh (?-ω-`) Most of the post-apocalyptic stories in JJ are about the rebirth and upgrade of the heroine. Well, the big label is very obvious. If it is a cool story, it should focus on the description of the heroine's upgrade after encountering the sail. Let me talk about something else here. The powerful support after the upgrade can be described from the perspective of passers-by. Fighting scenes, and then the intuitive feelings of the heroine. 2. The depth of character. For example, when the heroine heard the system sound for the first time, she acted confused, but, well, what should I say, that's all? Aren't you afraid? Or something like a breakthrough in imagination: I am the chosen one, and I will reach the pinnacle of life. The heroine behaved very calmly after that? Although this is also a sign of psychological strength, I didn't think about it at all when I was reading the book (if it hadn't been mentioned here, I wouldn't have known it had this meaning). 3. In fact, Da Da has a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot. At least there is no default in the first chapter. Just don't water it. 4. This greatly makes me feel gratified. This article is more shady than the article in "Taobao". Finally, I still want to show off my superior IQ, so forget it, I won't talk about it anymore. Also, if you want more people to pay attention to you, you can write fan fiction, such as "My English" and "Comprehensive English and American", which will lay the foundation for your popularity.