Ashes of Love is one of the few Chinese dramas I've managed to finish in recent years. I was hooked in the beginning, but by the end I was emotionally and physically exhausted. The characters had all fallen apart, and everyone in the show seemed to have split personalities. Still, I feel incredibly sorry for Da Long and hope he can find someone who truly belongs to him. That's why I started writing this story. I won't break up the Feng-Hua pairing, and the heroine is an original character. I'll borrow some concepts from Guardian and Mu Jun, such as Kunlun Jun, to give the heroine an impressively powerful background, the kind that lets her take on the whole world for Da Long. Her true form is a phoenix, but she's higher-ranking than the Heavenly Empress and the others: she's their ancestor. She's proud and domineering toward everyone else, but with Da Long she's a soft, sweet little treat. The story begins after Qiongqi is recaptured.
P.S. 1. The prologue and Chapters 1 and 2 mainly introduce the world and the heroine. Da Long won't appear.
2. This is my first time writing, so the prose is rough and the plot may be a minefield. Please go easy on me!
Theme:
I feel that Runyu's eldest son is a bit like Prince Changqin. He is as gentle as jade, dressed in white, and good-looking. Isn't that Prince Changqin? I feel like Runyu doesn't love the heroine much
Little ancestor, don't be careless and teach this unscrupulous descendant Tu Yao a lesson. Just thinking about it makes me freeze.
My little ancestor is amazing, Runyu said he was frightened
How could Qing Lian hate Runyu? If she hadn't created some illusion, what would have happened next? Speechless
These two women must be sick. I'm really speechless.
I want to know later Qiantangjun and shu? Li
The heroine Phoenix should also have a hairpin, right?
Every time I read an article, I don't understand that since Yu'er is going to be darkened, don't make the heroine so strong. What's the point? After the heroine is strong or weak, it doesn't matter. Yu'er is going to suffer anyway. It seems that the heroine's strong protection of Yu'er in the front is unexpected. And I had to write about that fantasy land where Qing came to arrange a battle between heaven and demons. It would be better for the heroine to go through Nirvana and torture a few idiots to death. I was really confused after reading the last few chapters. I would rather not have this heroine appear next to Yu'er and get hurt again! !
I'll go. . . . I still have the nerve to hate Runyu. . . . . Who planted the cause in the first place to create this effect?
I feel that Runyu's eldest son is a bit like Prince Changqin. He is as gentle as jade, dressed in white, and good-looking. Isn't that Prince Changqin? I feel like Runyu doesn't love the heroine much
Little ancestor, don't be careless and teach this unscrupulous descendant Tu Yao a lesson. Just thinking about it makes me freeze.
My little ancestor is amazing, Runyu said he was frightened
How could Qing Lian hate Runyu? If she hadn't created some illusion, what would have happened next? Speechless
These two women must be sick. I'm really speechless.
I want to know later Qiantangjun and shu? Li
The heroine Phoenix should also have a hairpin, right?
Every time I read an article, I don't understand that since Yu'er is going to be darkened, don't make the heroine so strong. What's the point? After the heroine is strong or weak, it doesn't matter. Yu'er is going to suffer anyway. It seems that the heroine's strong protection of Yu'er in the front is unexpected. And I had to write about that fantasy land where Qing came to arrange a battle between heaven and demons. It would be better for the heroine to go through Nirvana and torture a few idiots to death. I was really confused after reading the last few chapters. I would rather not have this heroine appear next to Yu'er and get hurt again! !
I'll go. . . . I still have the nerve to hate Runyu. . . . . Who planted the cause in the first place to create this effect?
I'm so angry, that one is green. . . . .