When Tuoba Jun was twelve, Sima Jin was fifteen and had just come of age. They first met at Wenhua Bookshop, both dressed as boys, and a fleeting glance was enough to leave an impression on them.
The next time they met, Tuoba Jun took the initiative to strike up a conversation. Once again, they looked like young men, and neither realized the other was actually a girl.
When they arranged to meet for a third time, they talked happily, but after they parted...
Seven years later, at the Bathing Buddha Festival beneath a bodhi tree, fate brought them together again.
Set in the Northern Wei dynasty during the Northern and Southern Dynasties period. An alternate history, with no strict attention to historical accuracy in the characters or plot.
Theme: A carefree life in seclusion, short story with a happy ending
Author, I'm not qualified to say anything about your article, but you wrote the mistress' mother like that, oh, she likes a girl and doesn't say it out loud, but just to keep her company, she marries her brother and becomes her sister-in-law, and his brother even knows about it, and even knows about it, and still has sex with the mistress' mother. It's enough to have a child. What if you don't have a child? If it's the heroine, can't you pick it up? Can't it be a couple in name? It has to be so disgusting. The heroine is not good at all. She gets married very casually. When I read your article in the middle of the night, I successfully lost sleep.
The writing is very good, but one problem is that "Northern Wei" was a name given by later historians to distinguish it from the Cao Wei regime. . . If you bring it back to that time, it can just be the Wei Dynasty. It's very strange to use the words of the Northern Wei Dynasty
The chapters of "The Mountain Falls into the Water" are the first time the princess's sinister side is clearly shown. In the past, she was bold, smart, and somewhat scheming, but not to the point of being sinister. Until she fell into the water and became angry and shouted to Wenhua to get lost, the chapter ended. Readers can't help but wonder, what if Wen Hua is so timid, what if the princess finally attacks, but is injured and retreated? How will the plot progress? Will the two of them have to go back and struggle for two chapters? Okay, the next chapter will see Wenhua being tricked. She knows what kind of trick Wenhua is most good at. She uses various tricks, pretending to be pitiful, flirting, seducing, and being good at seducing others in bed. She catches Wenhua and shows her sinister nature (the writing rhythm is so steady and great). In the subsequent turmoil in the court, seeing her cruel and ruthless methods towards others, it is not surprising that the emperor expressed slander and fear towards her. Therefore, "Falling into the Water" not only plays the role of breaking the ice between the characters, but also gives the princess a prominent expression of the personality characteristics. It is a very important chapter of succession and transition.
It's really nice, but the text is a little short.
DaDa finally wrote a sweet article, I hope it will be very sweet!