Dear Miss Undercover

The content is good, very fluent, and the overall look and feel is good. However, it is not obvious how the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist and was willing to help her. The male protagonist hypnotizes himself and is a very powerful person in psychology. How could he fall in love with the female protagonist so easily at first sight? Can't see it overall. Why does the heroine like the hero? I don't quite understand this point. Judging from the timeline, they haven't known each other for a long time, and the heroine also suspects that the hero is related to the bad guys. How can she believe in him just because the hero said "believe me"? He also relaxed his vigilance towards him. Personally, I feel like the male protagonist used hypnosis or suggestion techniques on the female protagonist, but I don't know how the author originally wrote it. From the overall storyline, it is obvious that Yang Sen is a person with problems, but because of the high-level protection, it can be said that the people below can't find it, which is logical, but I don't quite understand it here at the orphanage. The ending was a little surprising and ended too blandly. It would be better if there could be some unexpected reversal. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The author should not take it to heart (*≧m≦*)

I've finished reading the second book. The writing is great. Come on?

Why don't you let the police come?

It's a bit unfinished. The ending is too hasty.

Hhhhhh, this is a joke. Crazy laugh at the author's misfortune.

It's really well written.

Apart from the fact that it was too rushed, it was actually pretty good. As for the parts that the author deleted, I could only rely on chasing and breaking through the plot automatically. Anyway, congratulations on the finish.

No wonder it always feels like Operation Icebreaker used a prototype~~ Overall it's pretty good~ Come on, come on

In the end, it was really too rushed and it didn't feel that reasonable. If a person can do this, he will not run away when things are unclear, but he can still deal with it. There is also his sudden death by Shi and Shi's ending. There were bodyguards around him. How could Shi go from being scared at the beginning to killing him? There was nothing, and Shi's power had not yet been reached. When they saw Shi, I think as a police officer, what I thought of was to catch him. After all, he is also a criminal, instead of just watching him go. The emotional line is also unclear.

It feels like the protagonist plays a very small role in the whole story, almost as a bystander in the story, and the emotional line is a bit unsmooth. But I quite like it, and I'm looking forward to the next one! Congratulations on the completion!