At first, she was troubled by work, but somehow transmigrated to a prosperous country that had never existed in history: the Land of Wind. Perhaps it was the new surroundings, or perhaps she had been silent for too long. The wildness within her began to slowly run rampant...
In the end, as she stood atop the towering city wall and looked down over the entire realm, she suddenly realized she could not smile as she surveyed the world...
There are no major twists and turns in the plot yet Come on -v-~Author's reply: Will
There are two maids beside the bed. It feels better to use two maids. After all, ancient Chinese But at this moment, Guo Xue heard an extremely magnetic and cold male voice saying "Extremely" What catches the eye is a pair of ice-cellar eyes, which are tightly "locked" Crossing over to the eldest prince's weak side, "walking" and "walking next to the weak one" seems a bit strange. But I am not prepared to fight with your mother and concubine. "At all" I don't think I can spare him lightly. "Absolutely" Sorry, I just mistakenly thought it was the author I know on BS. Her nickname is also CC, and she just published the article not long ago. In order to express my apology, I helped catch typos by the way. I was encouraged and corrected. In addition, the personality of the heroine in the plot seems not to be flattering at the moment, but I watch a lot of BL so I can't comment. Maybe there will be progress after the expansion. Finally, if you changed the wording, just delete it. Author's reply: Thank you = = I'm so touched, why would I delete it? Come on Naiya!
Well, I'm still a little rusty with the pen, but I think it will be much better after some practice. Three-person articles need to pay attention to the introduction of scenes and persons. Secondly, the author is still insufficient in processing. You can read it yourself after writing to see the effect and modify it before posting. [In other words, I don't know how to do it…] For example: "After graduating from high school, it was really difficult for her to find a job because few people wanted her, just because of her academic qualifications... I couldn't walk any longer, so I walked under a streetlight. " It obviously feels laggy when reading, and there are many such places in the article... I don't feel it during the writing process, so it is better to make minor revisions later. Anyway, come on!!! Author's reply: Thank you for the author's reply: Occasionally! Must!
Standing in the basement, looking up at the sofa
Not bad.. I never thought, hey, when will I be as good as you...
Hey, does Huang Guifei have any secrets?
Little MM. Keep up the good work.
Well, you can write better than me. . , That heroine is quite powerful, that's how I feel. That is, the black-bellied type The heroine's name is more personal... Hey, you still have to write a few more chapters. . It's not interesting enough to watch!