I've started a major revision. I'm fixing errors and adding details, but the story itself has hardly changed. There will be a few small changes, and more interactions between Zhuji and Dalong.
As for extra chapters, it depends on how the revisions go. I may add some bonus chapters later. I've thought a little about the general plot: what kind of story would unfold if Zhuji regained her memories of a past life?
I wanted to watch a hundred episodes of Runyu's story, but nobody made them, so I'm writing one myself for fun.
Runyu: Who are you, really?
Zhuji: I am... your bones, your blood, the starlight in your eyes, the treasure in your heart.
The female lead's identity is special, but not in the way you think.
There's only a thousand-word blurb. Updates are irregular, and I may not finish it. It's all just my own daydreaming.
Theme:
I always feel that Runyu finally got his wish and married Jin Mi. This is what he really likes the most, silly and sweet! If someone is not pampered and raised, he must be a fool! In addition, how long can Runyu live? What I don't like about the story of Tiandiyu is that no matter how sweet it is now, it will end up being widowed and separated, or they will die early together. In short, it was because of Runyu's wantonness that she finally died in that relationship. Jin Mi was beautiful in Runyu's heart until her death. Even if she gave up and no longer loved her, she still felt that she was the most innocent and kind.
Myocardial infarction... Rebirth and memory loss, this setting is still unacceptable. Feeling sorry for Zhuji
I also think, is this Zhuji still the same Zhuji?? Not remembering the past, there is nothing that can be compared to amnesia, but in this little princess, I can't see Zhuji's intelligence, Zhuji's strength, Zhuji's persistence, Zhuji's character and ability. I only see a silly, sweet little princess who has been pampered and grew up. Apart from her name, I can't see any similarity between her and Zhuji. The man who endured all kinds of torture for Runyu and turned into a mermaid waited day and night without slacking off in cultivation and shared the pain just to see him again. He planned for Runyu and stained his hands with blood just to get what he wanted. He endured seven lifetimes of pain to stay by Runyu's side but only for Runyu's shadow. I must have felt satisfied at the end. Zhuji, who took her heart and blood for Runyu and cast her soul into the Eight Diagrams Furnace just to protect him for the rest of his life, is gone after all. How can the little princess without Zhuji's strength and character be said to be the original Zhuji? Just by having the same face? I just hope Runyu never realizes this.
Because I couldn't stand the middle of it, so I went straight to the end. The soul is one, but there is no memory, and even the identity has changed. All the energy has changed. Is it still the same person? Isn't this equivalent to reincarnation? Your last life and this life are the same person? Anyway, I don't agree with it. I really think it's funny. The same soul, but without the same experience, is actually not the same person. The twins have different experiences, that is, they are different people, because their thoughts are different.
Such a mean Jin Mi Xufeng.
Even if the heroine comes back, she won't be the same again...
He will not be that person after reincarnation,
Although the ending is beautiful, the Zhuji who was willing to endure all the suffering for Runyu is no longer there. What is reincarnation just, the predecessors planted trees and the descendants enjoy the shade? My wife's writing is very good, but it's just a little stubborn on my part, just like Platycodon is Platycodon, even if she is reincarnated, she is not Kagome. So it's really one issue at a time. (Reading this article late at night made me cry a lot, it really did)
All dead creatures are still saving Runyu. . . This is really a very strange woman who saves the male protagonist repeatedly without asking for anything in return. . . .
This is the best Runyu fanfic I have ever read.