After Marrying the Sweet-Romance Villainess [Book Transmigration]

Finished scattering flowers [spreading flowers][spreading flowers][spreading flowers] Nice article! The relationship between Jiaojiao and Yiniang is very reassuring. Jiaojiao is arrogant and cute, while Yiniang is smart but not arrogant. They are both open and generous. It's been a long time since I watched "Standards for Mating" that I haven't seen a character like Yu'an, such a sweet but not industrial cookie. I have always been obsessed with the teacher. I often read the teacher's column and then left with regret. Some time ago, I saw the teacher updating this article. I immediately saved it and will read it when it is finished. Sure enough, it still has this reassuring taste of love, sweet but not greasy. I took one, two, or three bites! Reading the whole article, the writing style is delicate and delicious [Like] However, there are too many characters in the article, and each character (such as the girls) appears one after another and exits in a hurry. The plots of these characters each have their own highlights, but the connection with the two heroines is too weak and is not integrated into the main plot. These plots not only add color to the article, but also weaken the coherence and closeness (?) Of the main plot (or main relationship). The main plot feels like the game is disconnected and then reconnected. I feel that your mastery of emotional scenes is very good, but when it comes to the plot, I feel that I haven't gone into it in depth. I feel that the plot is not closely connected, which makes the article feel a bit loose. The teacher can write less about the characters and focus more on the two heroines and highly related characters to connect these characters. Or simply double the length of the article (I am looking forward to you writing a long article [Spreading Flowers], teacher)) and write more about the plots of the characters so that they are more closely related to the main line. The plot and love of the main characters are also expanded and written more. It will be better! Another thing is the "Du family" issue. I didn't care much about it at first, but many people are more concerned about not writing the full name of Yi Niang's mother. I read some comments and I think they make sense. Finally, I hope that the teacher will start writing "Spider Web" as soon as possible, and hope that it will be completed in the future without getting into trouble. I also hope that the teacher will collect more of "Spider Web" [Spread Flowers][Spread Flowers][Spread Flowers]

I read two big books in two days. They are really good and sweet. Whether it is Xia Yuan, Meng Xiyue or Pei Mingjiao, Cui Yi will always be happy! !

The author always has the golden finger feeling of being able to write the scheming villain and the indifferent heroine in a very sweet and beautiful way. I haven't found a similar type of meal replacement yet. Although there are some small bugs like the previous mate selection type, it does not affect my reading experience at all. The author's writing is so cute, but he has to be careful when entering the pit. The author often gets lost in the third dimension.

The author is really good at writing about emotions, I still have more to say

I really like this pairing and the style of writing. Xiao Gu's coolness requires the princess's warmth to create a chemical reaction. The two people went from being distant and getting married by chance to falling in love deeper and deeper. In fact, the basis behind it is physiological love. I have read it many times. The author's writing style is very solid and very enjoyable to read. Like fragrant tea and mellow wine, the aftertaste is long and sweet

I like the characters written by the teacher very much. Both of them are very delicious. I watched the teacher's criteria for choosing a spouse before and I really like the portrayal of Yu'an. Unfortunately, I can't find a meal replacement. Mingjiao in this article is really well created. The teacher's writing skills are really improving. [Star Eyes] I hope to see more of the teacher's works in the future. I will always follow you!

When I first read this article, I felt that the writing style was very similar to "Criteria for Selection of a Mate", but I didn't expect that it was the same author! ! Then I went over the mate selection criteria again! I really like this style of cookie, no meal replacement, no meal replacement!

Although the second half is a bit rushed overall, it is a pleasant reading experience [orange candy] [orange candy] [orange candy]

The new article "Falling in Love with the Horror Boss [Infinite]" has been published. If you are interested, you can check it out [kiss][kiss][kiss] Copywriting: One day, the earth was abducted by a game called "Infinite Escape". I heard that people who opened this alien game went crazy and died. Under the official ban, there are always people who can't hold back their curiosity... World One: Unlimited reproduction Yu Yin had a benefactor, and suddenly one day in the city, there were countless faces like the benefactor, and they were all coveting and calling her name crazily... Yuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyinyuyin

Author, the article you wrote is so sweet, so sweet, I like to read it. Please write more in your free time. I can't get enough of it. I have already reviewed the mate selection criteria three times and four times (waiting for the author's new article (I will read it after it is finished) [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] [Prick-eared Rabbit Head]