The Man Behind the Delinquent
不良背后的男人
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
8Chapters
2Favorites
265Clicks per chapter
4Comments
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The author has an unconventional name and this is an everyday piece of writing. It seems that what you write is about daily life, but it gives me a boring feeling that there is nothing to do except eat, sleep and drink water. All in all, it is too ordinary. Try adding other detailed descriptions, special plots, and concept settings to make the article more interesting. There are unusual things in daily life. Find a good angle. Even if you write about eating together at school and after school... It can also be very sweet (too sweet will make you tired). You can change the taste appropriately!
The author has an unconventional name and this is an everyday piece of writing. It seems that what you write is about daily life, but it gives me a boring feeling that there is nothing to do except eat, sleep and drink water. All in all, it is too ordinary. Try adding other detailed descriptions, special plots, and concept settings to make the article more interesting. There are unusual things in daily life. Find a good angle. Even if you write about eating together at school and after school... It can also be very sweet (too sweet will make you tired). You can change the taste appropriately.