Endless Strange Tales

Gudan's "Broken off by the Regent after Rebirth" has been published, click on the column to view it

Shocked, the author suddenly updated after stopping updating for nearly two months. Is this a loss of morality or a distortion of human nature?

After reading it, I saw that the limited exemption period has passed, hahaha, thank you for the limited exemption.

It's pretty good-looking, I feel like it's sublimated in the end, short and concise

After reading it, I don't know what to say. I feel that the emotional line of the main CP is actually not obvious. The secondary CP is okay, but not very clear either. The main plot is not bad, but it feels a little rushed. If I write a few more dungeons, it might be more substantial, and the descriptions in the dungeons feel too brief, and I can't feel the thrill of watching suspense. I suggest that the author try to write some less logical stories before trying this kind of story. The worldview is relatively novel and complex, but only a small part of it is revealed, which is incomplete and relatively thin. Generally speaking, the writing is okay, but it is a bit sloppy. I suggest the author practice more to enrich the content of the article. The holes dug need to be filled in later. The emotional line must also be practiced, and some character interactions should be added to set off the emotion. The worldview structure should assist the plot instead of just existing in the characters and background. The timeline of the article should also be lengthened. You can first write a few modern urban articles to practice. I wish the author will improve his writing skills.

I've never played this type of card before, so it's a bit difficult to see.

…Sichuan peppercorns?

That's good. Death is not the end, it's just staying in the Endless Tower, and everyone will meet again eventually.

And Xiao Jiang is still alive. Anyway, congratulations to the author on finishing

So, Hutaoyue is alive and everyone else is dead?