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I’m getting back to revising this whenever I can, just so I can do justice to my unchanging love for Kenshin after all these years.
Looking back at what I wrote before, I realized the whole thing was written from an all-knowing narrator’s perspective. I’m going to revise until I drop~ Orz. It basically means rewriting the whole thing., 2011.2.7
Everyone, please feel free to offer suggestions~ If anything feels off, please point it out! I’ll definitely work on it! In short, if anything bothers you or the plot feels incomplete, please speak up! I’ll make improvements wherever I can! The main storyline will stay the same; I’ll do my best to fix the other issues and give the supporting characters more scenes. There’ll be a new chapter for the ending. New readers might want to wait until I’ve finished revising before starting, though of course you can read along and offer suggestions too ^_^, 2011.2.5
This is my first story, and my writing is still a little rough, so I hope readers will bear with me~
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Heroine: Tang Xuechuan (Tomoe Yukishiro, Xue Lingjuan) Hero: Himura Kenshin (the greatest assassin, the strongest swordsman, known as Battosai the Manslayer)
Regular version: Tang Xuechuan, an ordinary second-year university student, accidentally transmigrates into the world of Rurouni Kenshin, a story she knows well, and becomes the woman who gave Kenshin his cross-shaped scar: Tomoe Yukishiro. How will she survive in this turbulent era? What will become of her and Kenshin?
Simple-minded version: An ordinary girl transmigrates and tries to stick to her principles of keeping a low profile and acting normally, but she can’t help going soft around handsome guys~ She wants to change certain people’s fates without altering the major plot or the course of history. In the end, she unwittingly attracts a whole crowd of people, and her own love life becomes incredibly complicated - -. Since this is a one-to-one romance, some of the male supporting characters will have to take the hit~ I’ll do my best to give everyone a happy ending~
The undisputed male lead is Lord Kenshin~
The first and second male supporting characters are Okita Soji and Sagara Sozo.
The rest will be no more than ambiguous - -~ More than ordinary friends, but not quite lovers, so for now I’ll call them “good friends”~
This is my debut work, and it’s lighthearted and wholesome! You readers won’t need to strain your brains~ I really can’t write those schemes and intrigues, so this story is just for fun and relaxation.
Here’s a sweet picture of Tomoe and Kenshin~
At last, I can call this finished. (There’ll still be extra chapters and a major revision starting from the beginning, but it’ll probably be a long, long time before the revision is completely done. So, ahem, feel free to throw bricks if you like, but go easy on me = =!)
Anyway, thank you all so much for your support! (Bows!)
I made an MV for the Trust and Betrayal arc of Rurouni Kenshin. Feel free to take a look as you pass by~
Lord Kenshin’s sixteen-character motto: Graceful in the drawing room, skilled in the kitchen, fearless on the battlefield, and openhearted in love.
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The Greatest Gon Fan Ever
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(Western Fantasy) The Hero Returns
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When Chrollo Meets Chrollo
After reading the first five chapters, I felt that it was shocking. Wearing a kimono and hiding the dagger behind your back... Will such heavy clothes fall apart? If it doesn't break up, won't it fall? ... Ten thousand steps back, the Ba in the original book is an ordinary weak woman. Although she has a small dagger, she is not very strong. Now she can create her own tricks? Are you still dancing like a tiger? Are all the moves in the game just fancy? Does it take strength to kill someone with a real sword? One-on-five? And he casually avoided Saitoichi's tooth protrusion? You also need to be skilled at dodging knives, okay? A person from an ordinary age... Who went so far in sexual intercourse, really doubted that someone in high school had... Even faked his Adam's apple... Is Adam's apple so easy to fake? Are you pretending to be a headband placed at a roadside stall or cutting a piece of paper... And imitating a man's voice... A child's voice is predetermined by his parents, and even if the voice of Kenshin is a woman, you can't just imitate a man with a high-octave voice... The one who calls father-in-law is not the elder brother... And the one who teaches children to practice swords... Which company gives children real swords right from the start? I'm not afraid of children gesticulating on me, and the weight... Can children bear it? There is also tuberculosis... Nowadays, tuberculosis is a disease that you can only rely on to support and cannot bear the fatigue. A girl who doesn't know whether she has gone to middle school or not has the ability to know the prescription for treating tuberculosis... Girl, do you know how much Sichuan clam powder is worth? Do you know how long it takes to cook a medicine? Do you know what foods should be avoided when taking medicine? ... Besides, you have to prescribe medicine to people, and just give someone a prescription casually... Girl, do you think this is cabbage worth one dollar a pound? ... Besides, you can't even buy a piece of Chinese cabbage for a dollar now, and it takes effect after just one dose... Traditional Chinese medicine is famous for its slow onset of effect, no side effects, and the ability to eliminate root causes. It can be repaired... And that person who goes to other people's clothing stores every three days to get clothes... You just take things when others give you money... Where are the integrity, moral integrity, and so on? Which friend would give money directly to someone when interacting with them? It's not like subordinates take money directly and don't worry about being short-handed? And the pharmaceutical production... Even if you memorize the entire Materia Medica, Miss Formula, where did you get the raw materials? Are there any ginsengs that have been around for a hundred years? Is there a thousand-year-old Ganoderma lucidum? Where in that remote and remote place in Japan could you get so many unoriginal medicinal materials for you to toss with? Also, is there a medicine stove? Is there any medicine cauldron? Is there an alchemy room? There is nothing. Is this medicine produced by the Lord God and stored in an unlimited supply? And the air flow generated by that sword technique... What kind of sword technique can produce invincible air flow? □□? A woman who doesn't even have the strength to use a penis casually? Are Mary Sues too suave? And that little girl Lingluo... The female pig messes around with men, and if a handsome man approaches her within three steps, she will be fascinated by her. Not to mention the custom, Mary Sue is basically like that anyway. But why do you want to pretend to be a boy with a little girl you have been living with... There is no reason why you can't do it. Isn't it difficult to explain it? He also specifically told his younger brother not to tell anyone, and he was just there happily watching a little girl working hard to please her sweetheart... Is it fun to tease a little girl like this? Is it fun to play with a little girl's emotions? I feel like shit just looking at it! It would be fine if the author deliberately designed this, but if it is unintentional, it only shows that the author's character itself is very problematic... In addition, the female pig passed through Xuedaba's body and had her memories, but she accepted the feelings of Xuedaba's relatives and friends towards Ba with no burden at all. She even shamelessly took over the husband of the deceased as Ba... What kind of shameless thing is this? If she had been able to retrieve Yuan and find Kenshin when she was first resurrected, it could also be explained that she wanted to assume the obligations of her original body, but not only did she not go, but she had fun outside alone, and Yuan was later brought back by chance for peace of mind... This extremely willful approach makes people know at a glance that she is a child who has not grown up or even passed the rebellious period. ——In short, I am very unhappy because I spent money to read it and was forced to read an article like this that combines the characteristics of Lei, Su, Bai, and Su when the Internet is disconnected. It makes me feel mentally traumatized to a certain extent, so I will leave a negative review. In addition, I can no longer trust JJ's mobile phone rankings. It is really blinding that such a level can get so many rankings. Don't you feel that there is something uneasy in your heart when you recommend it?
It's been 14 years. Are you still there?
I have only watched the first few episodes of the main anime series of Rurouni Kenshin. After reading this article by the author, I watched the memorial chapter. I was moved by the story between Kenshin and Tomoe, and I hope they can have a happy ending. Author, please come back and write a follow-up soon. Although this ending that can be regarded as the ending is quite imaginative, I still want to see the author's original version...!!!
I'm so tortured by the remembrance chapter. When will I be back?
It's so fun to watch (∩_∩)
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Downstairs, if you don't like it, don't watch it, no one is forcing you. I worked so hard to write this article, so even if you hate it, don't talk about other people's articles like that!!
… Update soon…
I love this time travel, but... I can't accept some of the plots
Is it a mess or something?