[Harry Potter Fan Fiction] Fan Fiction About Fan Fiction

Eh. . . Careless. . . Fell in. . .

Why did you give up? It would be great to write out the subsequent settings in detail! !

Xiao Yue'er~ It's very immoral to do this~~ I will always supervise you~~ Oh hehehehehe

:) The setting is very classic. Although I still gave up, just looking at the setting still makes people feel excited - -~~~Amen~

We will support you, come on Xiaoyue

I would like to make some small comments~~I am definitely not here to make a fool of myself. Ta's article has become a classic among HP time travel fics, and fans who followed this fic have admired it for a long time. I just never came to see it. I thought of it during these two days of literary shortage. My biggest feeling while reading it was that I wasn't familiar enough with the original text of Tada! I don't know if it's because I'm not familiar enough with the original text, but I felt a little overwhelmed when I read it. Although I know that adults don't want to put too much of the original text in the article, it is really difficult to read. Many times I don't know what adults are saying or trying to express. I was confused by a lot of inner thoughts of the heroine (snickering/YY), and I began to consider whether I should read this article while opening the Tada original webpage. Personally, I think that a good fanfic should be understandable by people who have never read the original work. However, my lord, let me put it very bluntly, if you haven't read the original text of Tada, you really can't understand this article. Even if you have read it, you may have difficulty reading it if you are not familiar with it. Moreover, the heroine's character is a bit naive and naive. His demeanor was a bit high-key, which not only didn't make people feel powerful, but instead made him feel, ugh, a bit too arrogant. However, I also saw that the author explained to other relatives that this was to help Harry distract Old D's attention. But can such a girl who doesn't know how to hide, behaves rudely, disregards etiquette, and looks more like a lion than a snake, really get the approval of the snakes in House S? Although his strength is not weak and his family background is not weak, he really doesn't feel like he has much scheming. It's easy to be BSed by little snakes. It's fine in the G courtyard, but it feels a little weird in the S courtyard. Also, there are too many inner dialogues, and most of the inner dialogues are self-righteous, giving people a very white feeling. Some are too self-centered. Well, to put it bluntly, judging from the inner dialogue of the heroine, she is a self-righteous and invincible heroine... Uh-huh... If you think what I said is too unpleasant... Huh, then just ignore me... I just eat enough to hold on, and just ignore what I say. Don't let it affect your mood for writing.

Ahhhhhh I'm going crazy. I'm taking exams every day. It's annoying Harry, you are indeed the one who loves the professor the most. When can we move quickly to the scene I want to see

Author's reply:

The tower is actually knotted... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now I'm waiting for the second part. I don't know how Xiao Ha will pursue the professor... The author's reply: Looking forward to the second part of Tada But it's true that you can save money XD So the University of Tatmadaw is really considerate of us poor people.

Looking to the sky... The author's reply: Okay, I'll look at the sky too...