I drafted this when I was fourteen,
then left it abandoned for a long time.
At eighteen, I picked it up to revise it.
So immature, so very immature.
I'd even forgotten the original impulse that made me start writing it.
Maybe it's just a story.
I did the math and thought it over. I guess I was fourteen~
It's so rotten and white that only junior high school students can watch it! ~ Isn't it? The author's reply: Yes. ..
Why resign? If some things in the story are explained clearly, the author will reply: Leave some suspense, otherwise there will really be nothing to write about later.
Content content, Where is the content? I haven't seen anything, I've been trying to figure out the artistic conception and use popular writing methods. The author replied: The person I am now is really different from what I was 4 years ago. I wrote something for one person. Now that person is far away from my circle. It is really difficult to continue.
Can't go on? Theme theme
Although I didn't watch it But it should be good to think about it Author's reply: Didn't watch it...
Well written! The article is just a bit bland! ~It could be richer. I support you! Dear~The author's reply: Xixi, thank you for your support.
Why is the writing getting worse and worse? I read it three times and still don't understand it. No beginning or end. Author's reply: Sorry. The author replied: Sorry.
I haven't written this much since I was 14 years old, which is quite slow. Author's reply: Hehe, because I'm lazy...
Not bad, not bad. Yuyou, Shushu and Cocoa are all two-character names. It's a bit awkward to read. The author replied: It's troublesome to name it. It's not easy to understand or remember. Xixi~
I read this article very seriously, and I can still get by. Keep up the good work next time. Author's reply: Yeah, keep up the hard work.