[Prince of Tennis 05] Love Like Clear Tea (About Ryoma)

To be honest, your writing is very good, but the personal image of the heroine is terrible. When a girl discovers that she has strange feelings for another boy, there will definitely be hesitation and confusion, but it is definitely not the fear of facing her own feelings as you portrayed her. Although you later wrote that the heroine understood her feelings, the subsequent series of psychological descriptions made people angry. Since she was avoiding the male protagonist everywhere from the beginning, why did she leave? Why do you expect that the male protagonist will come back to find the female protagonist? I can only say that your thinking is very naive. From here, I can see that you are a self-centered person who wants others to follow you everywhere. You only live in your own world. You only think about yourself and not for others. In addition, when a girl really falls in love with a boy, that girl will not give up the person she loves easily for the pleading or intimidation of others. Maybe she will be confused, but she will never give up, because If a relationship wants to go on, the most important thing is to be honest with the other party and bear all the difficulties with the other party. Also, Long Ma is a proud man, and he will never allow the woman he loves to leave him because he is afraid of his own safety. In this novel, you said that Long Ma loves tennis, but Long Ma still loves Yun Keyi, otherwise Long Ma will not give up the tennis game, so you have not created the image of the male and female protagonists well, which is a very sad thing. You only wrote about Yun Keyi. It is for the safety of Long Ma that you left Long Ma, but you have never thought about what Long Ma will do if you leave Yun Keyi. The last thing I want to say is that you have described too little about Long Ma. I think you haven't read it carefully at all! Long Ma, he is A proud, a bit arrogant, a bit awkward, very confused about his own feelings, but a lovely person with amazing insight into other aspects. Once he decides on something, he will definitely continue to do it. Ryoma, he is very persistent. This is just my own opinion. If you don't like it, you can delete it. By the way, have you ever been in love?

Is it fun to show off your English? I came here to read novels, not to learn English.

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