That year, that month
Two hearts sealed beneath the ice,
who knows when or why they met again?
Bone-deep cold surrounded them both, yet afterward
it seemed a trace of warmth still remained.
Because of it,
playful teasing became true affection,
and bitter cold melted into a flowing warmth.
What is love, if asked of the world?
It comes like flowing water, then departs like the wind.
My heart is like the wind.
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Food for thought! Fortunately, Uchiha Itachi's character is not out of shape, try your best!
I finally know how to leave a message~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` Sister, your writing is pretty good. It's amazing that a high school student can write like this. Author's reply: Ah, don't reveal that I'm only in high school... I'm going to be treated like a child again...