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A benefactor is someone who fulfills the wishes of others. Qin Shi accidentally became a Host, and from then on traveled through various minor worlds, becoming a real-life wish-granting genie.
Female Lead No. 1: I want power!
Female Lead No. 2: I want freedom!
Female Lead No. 3: I want the truth brought to light!
Female Lead No. 1: All the realm's riches are worth less than you, A Tong. I offer you my kingdom as a bride price. Marry me!
Qin Tongshi: Get lost. I'm the one who gave you that kingdom.
Female Lead No. 2: I'm willing to give up my freedom for you.
Qin Tongshi: Sorry, I'm not willing.
Female Lead No. 3: I can never repay your kindness, so all I can do is give myself to you.
Qin Tongshi: Could you not repay kindness with a grudge?
Qin Tongshi thought her life was just too hard. She'd planned to wave goodbye and leave without a trace, but before she knew it, she was trapped by a
I was really angry. Gu Ran didn't do anything at all, so why should he keep his promise? And I really can't see how Xin Jin could love Dean Mo so easily and let go of his lover. Does Xin Jin really have no understanding of Dean Mo? In the previous world, didn't Xin Jin get a substitute and die generously without telling her? The writing of Shi Qi's article is immature. Dean Mo fell in love with Xin Jin suddenly and inexplicably. Normally, a big shot in charge of the system college cannot have a soft spot for Xin Jin just because he was rescued once dressed as a poor boy. No matter how I look at it, this is all obsession. The relationship line in the destiny chapter is better and more mature. The relationship between Aluo and Ali has the long-lasting love in the past life and the persistence in this life. It is easy for people to accept, and there are not so many people in the comment area looking for abuse←_← There is also the villain. In the middle and later stages of Chai Yan's small world, he came out to mock. It didn't make me want to kick him to death every minute like Ling Chen did. In the end, he suddenly made a move that was very effective. I didn't mean to say that the relationship between the two protagonists should have matured under the persistent obstruction of the villain after so long. This is the last world, how can it be broken as easily as the title of the novel? Can't we have more trust, tolerance and understanding on the road to love (questioning the soul)? Throughout the article, at first, Dean Mo had memories of stalking and imprisoning Xin Jin, but later, Dean Mo had no memory and ignored Xin Jin. He suddenly fell in love with a straight man whose emotional intelligence dropped, and his behavior was outrageous (his sister obviously had a high emotional intelligence). Let's talk about the time when Xin Jin hurt her hand to save her... And he actually watched his sweetheart walk away injured! Isn't the right thing to do instead of just carrying it back to the room to bandage the wound and then acting cute and rogue to explain and beg for forgiveness? And back in the entertainment industry, Xin Jin was in a difficult situation and was being exploited by her agent, but she didn't even know how to patronize her and get jealous. As a CEO, it's hard to check the contract of your sweetheart! It feels like the love between these two people is just words. What tortures and entangles each other to death is obsession. When they are disappointed, they leave and are imprisoned? This is not how junior high school students fall in love! If you don't know how to fall in love, Baidu will list hundreds of rules of conduct for lovers in a minute. If you really love each other, you won't do some things at all. It's okay to be jealous, but it's not okay to break up! Anyway, I haven't stopped complaining after reading this article. The scary thing is that I still want to see the ending. If I don't see them together, I will die with my eyes closed! But I really want to dismantle the cp
The above are my thoughts after reading. I feel uncomfortable with some things, Shi Qi. Don't mind. I came here after watching The Lord of Fate. I like Fate very much. Shi Qi has made great progress. Come on~
Oh ho ho ho, I almost sent the author a razor blade
Waiting for Qiqi's next novel! If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.
Those who haven't read the novel in the past few days haven't caught up with the first day of the ending! Let's give Qiqi a complete ending! (.??)
The emotional line is not enough →_→, I still think the emotional line is too stiff. There is a lot of foreshadowing that has not been revealed. Looking forward to the next one.
(≧ω≦) Fattening completed! Congratulations on the completion
It's over! Then leave a long comment and talk about your findings and some flaws in the article!
It includes ten worlds in total. The timeline is not long and it is not a standard system text. The world view is quite large, but not complete enough.
The first world: General x Prince.
To be honest, this title is quite inappropriate. After all, at that time, the dean could only be regarded as a military advisor. But in the later stage, the villain Yan came in to explain the heroine's halo problem, which was not bad, but it looked very green.
Secondly: the emotional line is very stiff, and it feels like a forced cp, and the darkening of the first world can be said to be a failure. Especially when the setting is still benefactor + goddess, the blackening is inexplicable, and the emotional transformation is inexplicable.
In fact, the dean's state at that time should be similar to that of our current star chasers. They admire and like them very much, but they have no idea of getting close to or even getting them. They just want to watch from a distance and are prohibited from playing with them.
In real life, does anyone feel like they have anything to do with their idol? Not even friends, let alone going further. At that time, Xin Xin was not completely afraid of the dean. I can only say that dean, your luck is at the maximum.
The second world is a campus type, which can also be regarded as a follow-up to the first world, and is considered a reincarnation type. As the dean's evil deeds first came to light, various people behind the scenes came to the fore, such as Qian Qi's college, A Chao, and Chase.
What follows is the long journey of the dean chasing his wife. As the plot develops, you can find that the author's writing is getting better and better, and the emotional lines gradually become smoother. However, there are also some foreshadowings that have not been explained yet. I will talk about it later.
The plot can be said to be very interesting. Although it is a system text, it is different from other system texts. Here, the system also needs to go to school, learn culture, work internship, and graduate. Moreover, the system is very user-friendly. Although the entire novel is almost the main character + supporting characters, with very few passers-by, it is generally smooth, without crashing or ruining the plot line. The weakening of the system is also very normal. Although it seems a bit abrupt, it makes people feel like it is natural, which is good.
Next is the analysis of some foreshadowing failures and several important characters.
Failure 1: Xin Xin bound Qiqi. Although it is explained here that it was a misunderstanding, as a system of the System Academy, if it is bound to the host even if it cannot be distinguished, it can be destroyed directly (although it was later explained that it was not a system, but she was at the time!)
Failure 2: Xin Xin's parents. When Xin Xin started the mission, she mentioned that she missed and worried about her parents, but when she finally returned to the real world, she didn't even mention her parents at all, and there was no report about her sudden disappearance. These parents were good enough, and they didn't report their daughter after a week without seeing her.
Failure Three: The plot is confusing, especially the ending. The cp is stiff and the emotional line is missing. Although fast travel requires a compact plot, yours is too compact. The chapters can be expanded appropriately, with more words and a detailed description of some key details.
The next step is foreshadowing. The problem of the Mo family losing control is mentioned more than once in the article, and why Yuque can control the loss of control, but this has not been explained. As for the problem of defect resolution, there is no mention of whether the defect has been solved, because in this world, we have not seen the problem of this defect being solved, and we don't know what the final result will be. This flaw and the Jade Palace are both a big foreshadowing, but they are not elaborated on, and they are just concluded hastily, leaving these two foreshadowings hanging in the air.
The heroine Xin Jin: calm and insecure. I don't have any feelings about accepting my own death. I am super calm, but too calm.
I can see that the second heroine, Mo Ruisi, has any characteristics, just like a doll, although her feelings for Xin Xin later are even more inexplicable.
Qianqi: The system responsible for being cute has no effect. It is just a decoration system that brings Xin Xin into the mission world. It is lively, cute and cute, and it is the full-text mascot.
Mo Chao's portrayal is pretty good, with both enchantment and infatuation shown. There are no major flaws, which is remarkable.
Chai Yan: This one is a bit broken. Although it was later explained why he hated the dean, he was obviously too simple and sensitive in his heart. He should be a mysterious villain. In the end, he was whitewashed into a sweet and infatuated character, which is a bit broken.
Furthermore, even if the tasks were assigned to the wrong person, what happened to her system? Logically speaking, the system would remind the host who the mission target is, but there is no trace of the system here.
In the end, she was so powerful that she could control the mission world at will. How did she get this ability?
Let's stop here for now, I'm too sleepy to remember.
If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.
Qiqi, explain! Foam! Xiaomo! I want to explain! ! Inside, the dean and Qian Qi are your two incarnations, right?
Explain Xiaomo!
It was collected too quickly, please pay attention next time
I was really angry. Gu Ran didn't do anything at all, so why should he keep his promise? And I really can't see how Xin Jin could love Dean Mo so easily and let go of his lover. Does Xin Jin really have no understanding of Dean Mo? In the previous world, didn't Xin Jin get a substitute and die generously without telling her? The writing of Shi Qi's article is immature. Dean Mo fell in love with Xin Jin suddenly and inexplicably. Normally, a big shot in charge of the system college cannot have a soft spot for Xin Jin just because he was rescued once dressed as a poor boy. No matter how I look at it, this is all obsession. The relationship line in the destiny chapter is better and more mature. The relationship between Aluo and Ali has the long-lasting love in the past life and the persistence in this life. It is easy for people to accept, and there are not so many people in the comment area looking for abuse←_← There is also the villain. In the middle and later stages of Chai Yan's small world, he came out to mock. It didn't make me want to kick him to death every minute like Ling Chen did. In the end, he suddenly made a move that was very effective. I didn't mean to say that the relationship between the two protagonists should have matured under the persistent obstruction of the villain after so long. This is the last world, how can it be broken as easily as the title of the novel? Can't we have more trust, tolerance and understanding on the road to love (questioning the soul)? Throughout the article, at first, Dean Mo had memories of stalking and imprisoning Xin Jin, but later, Dean Mo had no memory and ignored Xin Jin. He suddenly fell in love with a straight man whose emotional intelligence dropped, and his behavior was outrageous (his sister obviously had a high emotional intelligence). Let's talk about the time when Xin Jin hurt her hand to save her... And he actually watched his sweetheart walk away injured! Isn't the right thing to do instead of just carrying it back to the room to bandage the wound and then acting cute and rogue to explain and beg for forgiveness? And back in the entertainment industry, Xin Jin was in a difficult situation and was being exploited by her agent, but she didn't even know how to patronize her and get jealous. As a CEO, it's hard to check the contract of your sweetheart! It feels like the love between these two people is just words. What tortures and entangles each other to death is obsession. When they are disappointed, they leave and are imprisoned? This is not how junior high school students fall in love! If you don't know how to fall in love, Baidu will list hundreds of rules of conduct for lovers in a minute. If you really love each other, you won't do some things at all. It's okay to be jealous, but it's not okay to break up! Anyway, I haven't stopped complaining after reading this article. The scary thing is that I still want to see the ending. If I don't see them together, I will die with my eyes closed! But I really want to dismantle the cp The above are my thoughts after reading. I feel uncomfortable with some things, Shi Qi. Don't mind. I came here after watching The Lord of Fate. I like Fate very much. Shi Qi has made great progress. Come on~
Oh ho ho ho, I almost sent the author a razor blade
Waiting for Qiqi's next novel! If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.
Those who haven't read the novel in the past few days haven't caught up with the first day of the ending! Let's give Qiqi a complete ending! (.??)
The emotional line is not enough →_→, I still think the emotional line is too stiff. There is a lot of foreshadowing that has not been revealed. Looking forward to the next one.
(≧ω≦) Fattening completed! Congratulations on the completion
It's over! Then leave a long comment and talk about your findings and some flaws in the article! It includes ten worlds in total. The timeline is not long and it is not a standard system text. The world view is quite large, but not complete enough. The first world: General x Prince. To be honest, this title is quite inappropriate. After all, at that time, the dean could only be regarded as a military advisor. But in the later stage, the villain Yan came in to explain the heroine's halo problem, which was not bad, but it looked very green. Secondly: the emotional line is very stiff, and it feels like a forced cp, and the darkening of the first world can be said to be a failure. Especially when the setting is still benefactor + goddess, the blackening is inexplicable, and the emotional transformation is inexplicable. In fact, the dean's state at that time should be similar to that of our current star chasers. They admire and like them very much, but they have no idea of getting close to or even getting them. They just want to watch from a distance and are prohibited from playing with them. In real life, does anyone feel like they have anything to do with their idol? Not even friends, let alone going further. At that time, Xin Xin was not completely afraid of the dean. I can only say that dean, your luck is at the maximum. The second world is a campus type, which can also be regarded as a follow-up to the first world, and is considered a reincarnation type. As the dean's evil deeds first came to light, various people behind the scenes came to the fore, such as Qian Qi's college, A Chao, and Chase. What follows is the long journey of the dean chasing his wife. As the plot develops, you can find that the author's writing is getting better and better, and the emotional lines gradually become smoother. However, there are also some foreshadowings that have not been explained yet. I will talk about it later. The plot can be said to be very interesting. Although it is a system text, it is different from other system texts. Here, the system also needs to go to school, learn culture, work internship, and graduate. Moreover, the system is very user-friendly. Although the entire novel is almost the main character + supporting characters, with very few passers-by, it is generally smooth, without crashing or ruining the plot line. The weakening of the system is also very normal. Although it seems a bit abrupt, it makes people feel like it is natural, which is good. Next is the analysis of some foreshadowing failures and several important characters. Failure 1: Xin Xin bound Qiqi. Although it is explained here that it was a misunderstanding, as a system of the System Academy, if it is bound to the host even if it cannot be distinguished, it can be destroyed directly (although it was later explained that it was not a system, but she was at the time!) Failure 2: Xin Xin's parents. When Xin Xin started the mission, she mentioned that she missed and worried about her parents, but when she finally returned to the real world, she didn't even mention her parents at all, and there was no report about her sudden disappearance. These parents were good enough, and they didn't report their daughter after a week without seeing her. Failure Three: The plot is confusing, especially the ending. The cp is stiff and the emotional line is missing. Although fast travel requires a compact plot, yours is too compact. The chapters can be expanded appropriately, with more words and a detailed description of some key details. The next step is foreshadowing. The problem of the Mo family losing control is mentioned more than once in the article, and why Yuque can control the loss of control, but this has not been explained. As for the problem of defect resolution, there is no mention of whether the defect has been solved, because in this world, we have not seen the problem of this defect being solved, and we don't know what the final result will be. This flaw and the Jade Palace are both a big foreshadowing, but they are not elaborated on, and they are just concluded hastily, leaving these two foreshadowings hanging in the air. The heroine Xin Jin: calm and insecure. I don't have any feelings about accepting my own death. I am super calm, but too calm. I can see that the second heroine, Mo Ruisi, has any characteristics, just like a doll, although her feelings for Xin Xin later are even more inexplicable. Qianqi: The system responsible for being cute has no effect. It is just a decoration system that brings Xin Xin into the mission world. It is lively, cute and cute, and it is the full-text mascot. Mo Chao's portrayal is pretty good, with both enchantment and infatuation shown. There are no major flaws, which is remarkable. Chai Yan: This one is a bit broken. Although it was later explained why he hated the dean, he was obviously too simple and sensitive in his heart. He should be a mysterious villain. In the end, he was whitewashed into a sweet and infatuated character, which is a bit broken. Furthermore, even if the tasks were assigned to the wrong person, what happened to her system? Logically speaking, the system would remind the host who the mission target is, but there is no trace of the system here. In the end, she was so powerful that she could control the mission world at will. How did she get this ability? Let's stop here for now, I'm too sleepy to remember.
If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.
Qiqi, explain! Foam! Xiaomo! I want to explain! ! Inside, the dean and Qian Qi are your two incarnations, right? Explain Xiaomo!
It was collected too quickly, please pay attention next time