What Do I Do When the Protagonist Is Sweet on the Outside, Dark on the Inside?

Big cheers for the author! Great!

The writing is very good, but maybe the dialogue pattern is not very good. When I read some dialogues, I always feel that there are some omissions, hey!

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It's quite scary when you apply it to your own works. In fact, those protagonists and supporting characters who have been tortured by you may turn around and torture you to death. Sprinkle flowers for great support~~ The number of words in one chapter is a bit poor.

I have read five chapters, and the writing is very good. In the first three chapters, the plot is a bit stable, but in the last two chapters, it becomes more natural. I believe that the writing will get better and better! There is also a small question, what is white cut black? Hahahaha, please forgive the ignorant old aunt...

The writing style suddenly became concise and lively

Da Sima, please leave a review for the little cutie~~ I don't really read Kuaiwen, but I like the cute writing style which is gentle and not exaggerated. After reading the first three chapters, I felt that it was too gentle and had no explosive points. It feels like nitrogen fixation. The plot needs to be strengthened and drama is expected.

Finished reading two chapters! Let me tell you my opinion, I hope you will accept it! 1. The subject matter is a very popular time-traveling theme. So far, there is nothing out of the ordinary. It is quite interesting for the author himself to travel through a book and fall in love with the protagonist! Is a good story 2. The writing is smooth and easy to read. This is a very important and very good point. I hope to keep it! 3. There is a plot in the second chapter where Xie An found himself in his own novel just after traveling through time. I think there is some illogical logic. It can be written that he was confused for a long time and only realized after seeing many places. This plot can be written more. Of course, this is my personal opinion. 4. Now that I'm reading it, it's my favorite type, so please give it a try! I will come and visit from time to time ps: The forum ID is my ID Come on~