[Comprehensive] I'm Brother Ying

If I change the progress of this article into lens language, the current 5 chapters give me the feeling that the switches are too frequent. The timeline is now in the present, and runs to the past. There are several descriptions that make me feel that the author pushed close-up shots because "I like this rhetoric so much, it's so wonderful," hahaha, so it makes readers feel a little unnecessarily detailed. This is also the case when I write articles, because some plots are inspired, and some plots just have to be said, so the speed is always out of balance. Because I know what I need to explain, I ignore the audience's feelings when they read it sequentially. You can try to save the manuscript and revise it after a period of time when the inspiration and memory are not so clear. You will be able to feel the problem from the reader's perspective~

Since that year, Yingjiang discovered that it is really economical to go round and round, and rabbits have discovered that firepower coverage is really easy. The rabbits in the flower garden have collectively suffered from a phobia of lack of firepower. They can only be slightly satisfied by plowing the entire ground╮(╯▽╰)╭

Come on!ヽ(??ω??)ゝThe treasure I just discovered today, crawling carefully from the flowers, is so well written. You must read the comments on Kangkang My Flowers. Every word is a sincere praise for you! Wow, so pretty

With more help, can the bandit king overthrow the imperial court?

Woohoo~ Oh my god~ When will it be updated? So beautiful~