The Legend of Emperor Gaozu of Yan

Well, also, I don't know why, but I just don't like Yan Buqi. I'm actually optimistic about Ji Wuji, but I think Mo Hansheng can do it, and Zhou Li will make do with it if he can't. Even Yun Qianliu, who only appeared a few times, can be brought in to make ends meet, but Yan Buqi can't. It's not on the same line as Da Da's thoughts.

The article is a good article, but the plot really develops too fast, and some parts are too rough. Parts that were originally very sad or touching were moved too fast. I understand what is going on, but I haven't resonated with it emotionally. I want to express my feelings because the words are too light and I don't know where to put the feelings. Although I guessed what was going on at the end of the article, I was really interested in how Yan Buqi and Yun Qianliu faked their deaths, and I was also curious about how the prince could not recognize that she was a woman despite being taught by Xiao Ling himself. Maybe it's because the characters created through words are not rich enough, but I prefer those who appear less often, such as Yun Qianliu and Ji Baoer.

Ah, I really want to read the story of Siling and Mo Liangyan

Sprinkle flowers

Reading a large text is like taking a sharp turn, so what follows is also unexpected! It feels like what I was thinking about last moment, It's always different from what you're thinking about next, which makes people confused and gives readers a headache! Just like that "Wu Hualong" said that he is a concubine, but is the son of the royal family comparable to other families? Later, "Ling'er" was given a slap in the face because she didn't pay attention to "Zhou Li". Everyone would make trouble. No matter how hard the heroine was, she couldn't be quiet before and then be quiet after that. She didn't give Wu a good beating! Later, he turned into a "prince" again, which is even more impossible for someone who likes men! Could it be that it was popular at that time? Otherwise, how could a good young man have such an idea casually? I came from "New Girl", and I feel that the big stories always start before the end, and the process of development is too fast, and the process is not clear. I hope that I will revise my writing later. The writing is good, but after reading it I felt it was a pity! After all, writing a novel is not easy. I watched it with great expectations, especially since the ending of "New Girl" turned out to be like that. I believe many Lin fans will be disappointed with "Jingxian" written by Da Da! ! The feelings placed on "Ling'er" are even more confusing! In the article, Ling Er was a "martial arts master" before he was reborn, but here he turned into a "three-legged cat". He also "had a baby" quickly, and then he and Li Shan "ran around" without even having to do confinement. In the end, even "Concubine Yun" mutated! What is the relationship between the prince and the son of the leader of the demon sect has not been explained clearly. Maybe Lin Da will be unhappy after reading the comments he wrote, but even though "the love is deep and the responsibility is deep", I also feel that it is not worth it. This article could have competed for the "top of the rankings", and more fans can read it. Cheer up! I believe that one day you will be able to write many classic works that will make people forget to come back! This is my first time writing a long review, just to encourage you! I'm your biggest fan!

I like the female consort very much. I came to read this article and take it away first.

Aahaahha,,,,,,

Is there any postscript? ? ? ? ? I feel like this book would be really interesting if it had a postscript.

Aren't you 14 years older? How did you become a queen at the age of 22? Author's reply: Because Siling changed her age and identity in order to protect her!

That's pretty much it. Why do you think the Yuan family is so stupid? This conspiracy seems to have only harmed you.