In an age ravaged by war, Xuanze Shen Feng and Zhong Ziliang were invincible generals serving the same lord. Outsiders thought they were sworn enemies who could never get along, but in truth, they had long since fallen for each other, and their feelings ran deeper than ordinary affection. During a battle against the enemy, Zhong Ziliang was killed far from home. Shen Feng flew into a rage, and his inner demon erupted. A blood demon descended upon the world, unleashing a tide of slaughter in the heart of enemy territory and bringing the fierce war between north and south to an abrupt end. He then vanished without a trace. Later, people learned that he had settled on White Mountain, and so they called him the Hermit of White Mountain.
Many years passed, and the realm was divided into three.
Zhong Ziliang's reincarnation, Ming, reappeared in the world. After more than ten years of cultivation, he had become an outstanding disciple of Yunquandu Zhang. A message from the Hermit of White Mountain shattered Ming's peaceful life…
The author's writing is great! Very talented!
A few suggestions: 1. The name is too literary and arty to understand, so it is best to be simple and crude to let everyone know what kind of story the novel is; 2. The copywriting is relatively complicated, and it would be better if it could be simpler to mention the relationship between the famous characters, and some small theater or plots; 3. The novel is very interesting, but it is not divided into sections. The most important thing is that the title and copywriting are incomprehensible.
I suggest you break it into sections to make it look easier~