Luo Xi: "From the moment you found me, I was yours."
The Guest: "Oh my! Miss, why are you in such a sorry state? You're so beautiful. Do you have someone you love? Why not come home with me? ...What, you're a man!"
One is a dashing young master from a great family.
The other is a destitute beggar, quiet and taciturn.
An unexpected incident sets the story in motion, and everything changes.
Luo Xi: "Everything I did was so I could be worthy of you. Now that I've achieved that... don't leave."
The Guest: "I won't let a single one of those people get away with it! In that accident, 'The Guest' died... Ha! Where did all the rules of this world go?!"
The Guest is the bottom / Luo Xi is the top
Very well written, keep it up