Peach Blossoms, Faces Fair and Lovely

Hmm⊙?⊙! I'd like to give you a suggestion. You described too much about your appearance before. You can make it a little simpler and don't use too many descriptions. The rest is fine.

The description is good, but some places are overused and exaggerated. I like it, keep up the good work ^0^~

If I like your eyes, why don't I cover them too, hahaha

Good-looking, good-looking, great writing style