[The Ugliest Fated Romance in the Immortal Realm, the Most Impossible Couple in History]
At their first meeting, she captivated a city; at their second, all living things; at their third, even fate itself. This is the story of two ill-matched lovers, and an undying legend in the hearts of the countless spirit cultivators of the Eastern Sea Kingdom. Whether tender or bloody, from the moment they met, their ultimate fate was sealed.
"Kid, what’s your name?"
"I... My name is Luo Tian. Luo, as in the character made of the horse radical and each. Tian, as in sky."
"My name is Xi Yue. Xi, from the Xi family. Yue, as in moon."
"W-what a beautiful name..."
"Kid, save your flattery... From now on, you’re with me. If you run away, don’t blame me for giving you a thrashing!"
"Okay!"
There is a world called the Immortal Realm, there are people called spirit cultivators, and there is a kind of fate called a doomed romance.
An Immortal of Medicine as burly as a strongman; massages that help heal injuries; a Wise Immortal who loves playing chess with passersby; Shanhai Street, where divine beasts and artifacts can be drawn at any time; and Langhuan Paradise, which contains all kinds of books, even private diaries... These are the strange tales and curious happenings of the Immortal Realm, a part of the spirit cultivators’ love and memories.
[Two updates daily, at 11 a.m. and 6:30 p.m. If any scientific facts in the story are wrong, please forgive me. Thank you for your support!]
It seems pretty good-looking, so I'll take it.
The paragraph is a bit dense, please work hard
It would also be good to change Luo Tian to Luo Tian