Two Aries, ten years of love and war.
Keywords:
A clichéd plot, but no cringe or weak-willed characters; shallow characterization and clumsy prose;
subtle inner thoughts, explicit sex scenes; a happy ending, based on a true story.
Please be honest with your feedback:
I have no writing experience, and this is my first novel, so it's bound to be rough. I'd be grateful for your valuable comments, and hope you'll point out what needs improvement.
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I still can't accept the male protagonist sleeping with someone else without any emotional basis. It's as disgusting as swallowing a fly.
I was also born in April, and I am also a fan of Sister Fei, and I am very curious about how the prototype is doing. I was born in 1980, so I am 43. Even if they don't have the excitement of their youth, I hope they can stay together.
The male protagonist is so disgusting. Go to hell.
It's beautiful. It is said that this article is a true story of the author's friend.
Ah, it turns out that most of them are real events. I read it in one go and it felt so good. What I want to say next is that in reality, there really is such a love. I read another book, Zhang Fan, is he the one in this one?
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I read this book over and over again, at least 10 times, when I was short of books. It is very fresh and interesting. The characters in the book are imaginable. There are several scenes that I like very much and they resonate with me very much. Come on.
I read your novel I just like Beijing
Landi and Shi Nan are really boring. So pure, so pure The clip in the middle tortured me to death~
So pretty!!! Is this article really a debut?