Rose of the Abyss

Coming from BS, the writing style is really realistic. In fact, I think it's OK. As for online writing, you should be happy yourself, happy to write, and happy to read. I would like to give you a little suggestion. It can be made into a short story. Each chapter is short but has enough connotation. A wonderful short story can be reversed. If it is multiple stories, it can be changed into a quick travel. In addition, I think this subject can be put into non-CP. I will talk about it after seeing it. The key depends on what you think. Come on.

I am also a newbie, and to be honest, I think Jinjiang may not be suitable for this kind of realistic writing style. It would be best if the first three chapters of the book torture the scumbag man fiercely, which may be more eye-catching. The copywriting feels too literary and cumbersome, so it would be better to consider revising it, because I am not an experienced author, so to attract readers, I must use eye-catching methods. Of course, if you feel that you like it very much and do not want to revise, it is also feasible to stick to your own method.

Poor Celine was ruined by her animalistic stepfather Yan Shuren when she was still in her prime. This guy with a human face and an animal heart should really be pulled out and killed! It turns out that this bad guy has not changed his evil ways and continues to hurt other little girls. It's so abominable! Celine, you don't have to be afraid. Stand up bravely and expose this devil. His crimes should be exposed as soon as possible, get a public trial, bring him to justice and send him to prison. Let the world be peaceful and peaceful, so that girls will no longer be harmed by evil people.

There are twists and turns, this is because Celine passed on the light that lit herself up to the ghost baby. In this world, people can change. Children like Guiwa who have gone astray can also take the right path in life with Celine's care and guidance. Looking forward to the exciting content of the next chapter.

Living is meaning. Celine received a ray of light, and she lit herself up: I can stand up and go my own way. These words are the golden words of this chapter, and they also pave the way for Celine's transformation in the subsequent stories. Let us like the author!??

The real world is your own stage. Well said! Chang Fei should release her inner emotions and let her mood fly. Chang Fei was lucky. During the most difficult time, Li Zhen lent a helping hand to help her take care of her family and spend time with her children. She is an understanding mother.

Oh, it turns out that Lu Feng didn't know that his young wife had been mentally injured when she lost her job. After she became pregnant, she became depressed when she stayed at home all day long. Lu Feng did not analyze Xiu's abnormal phenomena and did not take her to a doctor in time. Instead, he was dissatisfied with her, causing her to eventually develop bipolar disorder and become manic and lose her temper for no reason. He still couldn't understand and felt resentful. So when Xiu filed for divorce, he didn't hesitate. This is because Lu Feng is a medically illiterate and did not put himself in his wife's shoes, which led to the tragedy of this marriage. No wonder Yuan Cheng was rude to Lu Feng when he saw his sister in this state. When a new family is formed, during the first few years of the running-in period, the husband and wife must be considerate, understanding and supportive of each other. In particular, the husband must give enough care to his wife during pregnancy, lactation and menstruation, so that the new family can smoothly go through the running-in period and move towards a better future...

It seems that everyone's first love in the world is beautiful and sacred... This chapter uses a diary to unfold Lu Feng's love past, which is more casual and touching. Lu Feng is warm-hearted and helping others is his style. But such good people also part ways when they encounter disharmony in love. I think he did it as a last resort. Recommendation to the author: In the future, I hope that such a good person will have more stories or scenes.

In public places, especially in crowded places, some scumbags will be ready to commit crimes against girls who are not experienced in the world. I think the subway is relatively safe. The most dangerous situation is when the bus is overcrowded after getting on the bus. A few years ago, I also saw a scumbag in his forties on a bus. After getting on the bus, he got very close to a girl who looked like a student and tried to do something inappropriate. At that time, I was standing not far away and accidentally discovered it. I thought it was bad! I coughed hard. To remind the girl. At this time, the car suddenly braked and everyone changed their positions. The bad guy couldn't go on. The car arrived at the stop and the girl got off, and I felt relieved. Girls should always be aware of their surroundings when going out, and it is better to be more cautious. So as not to suffer a loss. Because it is difficult to capture the other party's evidence for this kind of thing. Celine was brave and clever and caught the bad guy.

I sincerely admire Chang Fei's persistence and bravery. It's not an exaggeration to use the saying "Where there is a will, there is a way" to evaluate her dialogue with the interviewing executives. She earned the executive's trust through her candor and her genuine love of advertising. Congratulations to Chang Fei for passing the interview with a high-end advertising company. She finally has her own tunnel light!