A Daily Dose of Sweetness [Book Transmigration]

Alas, this heroine had a very high IQ in her previous life. How come she has no IQ in time travel? Where did her IQ go? Jiaojiao is really Jiaojiao.

To comment objectively, the novel is a little off-kilter towards the end. Except for the beginning of the overseas plot, which I thought was pretty good, the more I wrote about the plot of returning home, the less interesting it became to me, and it didn't make much sense. In fact, this phenomenon is normal. Many novels are amazing at the beginning but boring at the end. Very few novels are exciting from beginning to end. The author can design the overall plan of the article more carefully. As for the ending, I think it can be written more exciting. To be honest, I am not very satisfied with the ending of this novel. It gave me a feeling of, ah, it ended like this, a little too sloppy. I felt a little disappointed, because I am the kind of person who likes wonderful endings very much. If the ending is not good, my impression of the novel may not be good. But overall it is still good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the novel will get better and better. One last question, why can't I see the system in the later stage? Where did the system go?

The Fu Shao I saw earlier was so perverted that he almost gave up writing, but luckily he persisted and gave me a lot of praise~

Frankly speaking, at first I thought the male protagonist might be Fu Shao, and I even expected him to change, but he was too paranoid. Later, when I saw the diary of the heroine or the original person, I felt that in the original novel, the original person might have lost his memory and really fell in love with Fu Shao, but in the end he was tricked to death by Fu Shao himself. I really like the heroine in this article. Maybe it's because of the external attraction. After all, Master Kong said that "eating and sex are the same." However, I think the male protagonist and the female protagonist are bound to be together based on their personalities. For example, the extra chapter mentioned the male protagonist's past. The female protagonist has always been relatively independent and thoughtful. Otherwise, she might have followed the system and considered attacking Fu Shao. Although there may be many male supporting characters mentioned around the heroine in the article, such as the hero's younger brother, He Linjiang, and Lao Lou (I'm sorry I suddenly forgot his name), in fact, the younger brother should be close to the hero. Because I feel that the younger brother is a bit of an assist and may be busy, so I didn't mention it too much. Another little suggestion is that it may be due to the setting, but the relationship line between the male and female protagonists actually made me wonder if it was just for sex, haha, but later on, I really like the style of Dada. I feel that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are actually a more natural kind of together. It's a pity for Lao He. If you can, I would like to read Lao He's article haha ​​(●°u°●)??"

Frankly speaking, at first I thought the male protagonist might be Fu Shao, and I even expected him to change, but he was too paranoid. Later, when I saw the diary of the heroine or the original person, I felt that in the original novel, the original person might have lost his memory and really fell in love with Fu Shao, but in the end he was tricked to death by Fu Shao himself. I really like the heroine in this article. Maybe it's because of the external attraction. After all, Master Kong said that "eating and sex are the same." However, I think the male protagonist and the female protagonist are bound to be together based on their personalities. For example, the extra chapter mentioned the male protagonist's past. The female protagonist has always been relatively independent and thoughtful. Otherwise, she might have followed the system and considered attacking Fu Shao. Although there may be many male supporting characters mentioned around the heroine in the article, such as the hero's younger brother, He Linjiang, and Lao Lou (I'm sorry I suddenly forgot his name), in fact, the younger brother should be close to the hero. Because I feel that the younger brother is a bit of an assist and may be busy, so I didn't mention it too much. Another little suggestion is that it may be due to the setting, but the relationship line between the male and female protagonists actually made me wonder if it was just for sex, haha, but later on, I really like the style of Dada. I feel that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are actually a more natural kind of together. It's a pity for Lao He. If you can, I would like to read Lao He's article haha ​​(●°u°●)??"

Frankly speaking, at first I thought the male protagonist might be Fu Shao, and I even expected him to change, but he was too paranoid. Later, when I saw the diary of the heroine or the original person, I felt that in the original novel, the original person might have lost his memory and really fell in love with Fu Shao, but in the end he was tricked to death by Fu Shao himself. I really like the heroine in this article. Maybe it's because of the external attraction. After all, Master Kong said that "eating and sex are the same." However, I think the male protagonist and the female protagonist are bound to be together based on their personalities. For example, the extra chapter mentioned the male protagonist's past. The female protagonist has always been relatively independent and thoughtful. Otherwise, she might have followed the system and considered attacking Fu Shao. Although there may be many male supporting characters mentioned around the heroine in the article, such as the hero's younger brother, He Linjiang, and Lao Lou (I'm sorry I suddenly forgot his name), in fact, the younger brother should be close to the hero. Because I feel that the younger brother is a bit of an assist and may be busy, so I didn't mention it too much. Another little suggestion is that it may be due to the setting, but the relationship line between the male and female protagonists actually made me wonder if it was just for sex, haha, but later on, I really like the style of Dada. I feel that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are actually a more natural kind of together. It's a pity for Lao He. If you can, I would like to read Lao He's article haha ​​(●°u°●)??"

I still like Fu Shao. It would be nice if his possessiveness could be weaker and not so extreme.

Let me talk about my impressions after reading this book. Both He Linjiang and Fu Shao were very impressed by this book. On the contrary, the male protagonist could not construct a portrait in his mind. It was strange. After all, the male protagonist had a lot of roles. Then I didn't expect that this extra story was about the male protagonist's mother. I didn't really want to read it. I read it through the whole process. Overall, the book is quite good.

I really feel sorry for Fu, but I feel that he deserves it. The poor man must be hateful. I don't like the male protagonist very much. On the contrary, I think the forensic doctor is very good. If Fu were the male protagonist, maybe there would be another ending. If he were the male protagonist, would he be less stubborn? Would he go to a psychiatrist for the female protagonist and slowly correct himself, so that he could have a good ending with the female protagonist? In fact, he can do all of these. No, maybe it's because he is the second male lead. The second male lead tortured me so much that my heart ached and I burst into tears. Xiaofu, I hope that in your dream, you can realize your mistakes, correct them, and be happy with Jiaojiao and your three children.

Can you write "The Little Wife Dressed as a Villain Boss" first? The copywriting is beautiful (??ω??)?? I specifically read a few novels that I have yet to write, and this one has the most collections!