This story is the author’s embarrassing past. Don’t read it, don’t read it, don’t read it! I’m saying it three times because it’s important.
This story needs a major revision. Everyone, wait until I’ve fixed it before reading! I just want this warning to stand out. If you still can’t see it, there’s nothing I can do!
Note: You can beat me up, and I’ll obediently take it.
You can tease me too, and I’ll make sure you’re satisfied.
But my tender little heart can’t take a fierce barrage of brickbats. I’ll be traumatized = =
Also: The heroine of Till the End of Time does not transmigrate into this story! If you don’t like that, please close the page. I’m begging you!
Premise:
I finally finished reading it. Because many chapters of the article were locked, I still couldn't understand it after reading a lot of V articles.
When I watched it, I thought it was very exciting, but I always felt that the ending was weird and unreasonable. Why did she choose a male pig's trotter? I thought it was worse than her divorced husband.
Really good article. I prefer Xiao, like Wen Shui
Netizen: The immortal pig expressed my feelings, so I won't say more...
I like White Liusu very much. Although I can't see the V part, I still reluctantly took it off the shelf. Thanks to the author for the generous points, which allowed me to see the ending of the white version. It allows me to conclude this article. No matter what, I will continue to pay attention and support you! Come on!
I'm not making a fool of myself, I'm just reasoning, but the author feels that my money is really not worth it. It was fine in the beginning and very attractive. After V, I really cried out that I was deceived. First of all, you are a woman who is almost 30 years old and still despairs about love and marriage. How can you look so naive when you are a 15-year-old woman who is in the first year of high school? Her speech is extremely naive, such as her conversation with Gao Gao at the beginning of school and Later, there were so many things (normal situation: for example, I am now 26, the same age as her. If I have been in love with a man for more than ten years, lost my heart, lost love, and finally divorced, you ask me to go back to the past and play flirtatiously with a group of little brats who have not even grown their hair and have not yet completed their development. Now I get off work every day and watch those high school students wearing dark clothes after school. Deep, pretending to be charming makes me goosebumps. I really can't accept it based on my mental age. To be honest, I think many men of the same age are extremely childish. I may only be able to carry my 15-year-old body and become obsessed with mature men in their thirties.) Later, the author may also realize that all the supporting characters created have become freaks ( "Urban elites" who are all wearing the shell of 15 or 18 years old), I still recommend you to watch "Rebirth: The Storm Rises Again". I don't mean to write a "heavy" plot, but just look at the age, experience, and personality description of the characters, because the transition of normal teenage characters in it is much more natural and normal~ Express your personal opinion, if you don't like it, just pretend you haven't seen it haha
I was looking forward to reading it before I opened the V-story. I guess I was very busy in the post-production period and lacked sufficient inspiration. It felt a bit perfunctory and deceitful at the end, and the writing style was very mediocre in the end.
I like both endings very much But is this too short? It feels like the connection is somewhat disconnected.
I was so dizzy that it ended in such an anticlimactic manner, I regretted it! Agreed, I felt that the ending was too rushed, focusing too much on describing other parts, but neglecting the emotional description. It felt a bit abrupt with Akatsuki, but the writing before V was better.
I think the story is well organized and has the feel of a modern prose novel. It doesn't focus on the story but focuses on expressing what it wants to tell the readers. It's subtle and introverted and I like it very much.