Madness

I finished reading it in one sitting, and now I feel heavy-hearted The author's writing style may not have been very mature when he wrote this article, but it doesn't matter, this can be improved. I feel a little sorry for what happened to Wen and Lian, and for the ten years they spent blankly. There are many things in the story that are not clearly written. For example, the incident when Wen Yulian met Zhou Xunqing should be written clearly. Did Wen Yulian's uncle get punished later? How did Wen Yulian become a bodyguard? Did he not go to college? How did Zhuang Zhuang's adoptive parents treat her? Did Zhuang Zhuang change his name... Too many things are mentioned in one stroke. In the early stage, Da Da spent a lot of time creating a character of Wen Yu Lian who was willing to degenerate and thought he had no future. He met his lover Zhou Xunqing, and there was redemption, but I didn't think it was much. I think Wen Yulian's extreme and depressed character in the early stage will not be so easy to pull back. I think Wen Yulian needs a strong person who has absolute ability and can guarantee that he will always be Wen Yulian. Wen Yulian is extremely lacking in love. Perhaps after his father passed away and his mother couldn't wake up, he would have hoped for someone to love him at the beginning. From the initial hope to disappointment, despair to the end, it didn't matter. After reading the whole article, there are many good things and many bad things (I don't mean to criticize). I am actually very resistant to the plot of encountering the law, such as the person I accidentally killed, such as the ten-year imprisonment, etc. (I'm not scolding, I just really don't want such a plot. After all, the author's target is a campus article) What happened to Wen Yulian in the early high school life was so chaotic. I didn't write it clearly here, which made me feel uncomfortable and sad. Many people didn't arrange for them to appear later. Ji Huai was also written in the extra chapter. I feel that when Wen Yulian meets such a person and has such a life, no matter how invincible he is, It will be very tiring, and most likely the character is a little biased. I understand Shou to be a very contradictory person. He does not surf the Internet, is not good at words, has lost passion for life, has no dreams, and is self-destructive. However, he is a very kind and low-self-esteem child. He does not like to cause trouble to others, so he is always alone. I think it is really difficult to save such a child, because he feels that the world does not welcome him, and of course he does not have any attachment to the world. There are many more things I want to say. The above are just my personal nonsense. If you have time, just take a look at the child. If you really read it, you will be happy... If my remarks have a bad impact on DaDa, then delete them. Finally, I wish you better and better!

There are many things in the book that are not explained clearly except for what I mentioned above. There are also Zhou Zhou's good brother A Gu and Brother Qiu. They all do not appear later. Maybe my words are a bit extreme, but I still want to say that I feel that the villain is the author's own. The protagonists may have been picked up and abused. The law will never help good people, a legal society, but I basically didn't read the shadow of the law in this article. Probably the only clear thing is that both he and Hua Mei's mother were sentenced. The whole article gave me a very dark feeling, and I couldn't see the positive energy. If Wen Wen and Zhou Zhou's relationship is well written, there is some comfort, but the emotional description is very strange to me. If in the end, even after so much, they still won't let go of each other's hands, that's okay, but Wen Wen wants to give up. They have been through so much, and their relationship is riddled with holes. The rest of my life is long or short. I am not that optimistic. I think they will be happy. The text said that they are each other's salvation. From the previous article, maybe so, but from the later article, I don't think so. I feel that they have become each other's deepest scar. They cannot let go or forget. The happy and peaceful life in the student days will probably never go back. It is painful to live like this after a hundred deaths. Also, the author wrote five or six chapters of Ji Huai's extra chapter in the end, which makes me feel that there is a tendency to whitewash him. The sadomasochism is deep. Sadomasochism is sad enough, deep love, maybe

I can't stand watching anymore, so I have a few words to say: 1. At the beginning, the perspective changes randomly, and the supporting characters are not introduced, which is very abrupt and boring; 2. There are many plots of bullying and death, so focus on the description. One or two paragraphs are enough, and we are not looking for abuse; 3. There is too little writing and ink on the deserted side, so it's hard to feel the same way; 4. Are there any misunderstandings about "campus literature"? 5. There are many typos and the meaning of some sentences is unclear; 6. Forcing literature and art is very dramatic

I suddenly want to eat Huamei and Lengqing

"Let" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Add "you" after it

Good article, but I won't read it again I am not a very sunny person, I am a bit depressed, and I felt a little dazed for many days after reading the article.

Love it. Very interesting. Love this story!

Well, since Zhou Zhou is already so good, why not check it out?

Can deaf people hear speech?

... Da Da finally started writing normal campus essays/covering her face and crying