[Prince of Tennis] A Melody Lost in Early Summer

It would be better for the author not to write a side story about Atobe. Although the writing is good, I think since Atobe liked the heroine before, it would be better not to fall in love with anyone else again. This is true love.

In order to avoid receiving a yellow card, there will be no points this time. I finished reading this article today~~~The ending is very cute~~I like it so much~~~^-^ Thoughts on this article: It was really sad to see Xia Yin being wronged~~when Feng left her~~~T-T~~Although Feng was only a teenager at the time~~may not think about many things too thoroughly~~but~~this is too much for Xia Yin~~after that~~I still want to get back together with Xia Yin~~so I have a very bad impression of Feng in this article (he is not worthy of Xia Yin at all)!!! But~~I saw it in the end~~I am very happy that Xia Yin was vindicated~~There is also a happy ending~~Congratulations!!! Also~~Thank you for your hard work~~~~Please continue to work hard in the future!!! ^-^

I stayed up late to read this article. . . . The aftertaste is long. . . Well, after working for a day, the computer has some glitches. . . Just showing your little head at the end won't be considered PIA, right? Although the storyline seems to be the same, I have to say that it is really touching! The same plot, in the hands of Da Da, becomes more than just an empty plot without any connotation. When I saw the misunderstanding between Feng and Xiaoxia, I finally couldn't hold back my tears. Therefore, there is always a very sincere feeling in the big text, which makes people's mood rise and fall unconsciously with the plot. A certain person is just a junior high school student and has never written any long comments, but he still can't help but want to communicate with Da Da and express his views on the article and share it with Da Da Da. After all, you also want to understand the readers' feelings, right? I feel that the character's personality in the article is quite accurate. Even the part where Feng misunderstood Xiaoxia was not inappropriate. You are right. They are all just junior high school students like me. No matter how mature they are, they cannot face emotional matters calmly and correctly, so I think the part where they misunderstood is the most touching and true! The heroine's mood is conveyed to someone's heart through large words. It's been a long time since I've seen such a real and touching article. EG articles seem to be more popular now. Many of the articles I see are full of EG. Although laughter is laughter, there is more than just one emotion in the world. In large articles, there is happiness, sadness, anger, confusion... Various emotions in life are naturally integrated into the story, and the article appears real and close to life. A certain person habitually turns words into pictures and plays them in his mind like a cartoon, as if they were real. Although this article cannot be said to be perfect, the handling of certain plots and the use of words are not ideal, but since it is a hobby, there is no need to ask for perfection, and perfection is impossible in this world. As long as you like it and readers like it, then it is a success. You know, it takes a lot of willpower to write such a long article seriously from beginning to end! A certain person created more than a dozen word documents and found more than a dozen materials to write, but none of the novels was finished. . . =U= Finally, let me symbolically highlight the theme: truth is the most effective magic weapon to create touching articles! The long comment that is not a long comment (…) is over, let's say some more pleasantries. Damn, keep up the good work! Although you are taking time out from your busy work to write, please continue writing! Writing, even if it doesn't become a job, will be of great help to you. When you are tired, read and write, and you will feel much better. And writing is also a great way to cultivate your sentiments, so don't give it up because of work! I will continue to support Dada, and hope that Dada can continue to create more and better articles based on the true and touching writing style! Sincerely, salute. . . . . = =

I think your writing, Zero, is good and has your own style, but it lacks a bit of interest. If people's writing level is divided into 5 levels, 1 is the highest and 5 is the lowest, then you belong to the level 2 to 2.5. (O(╯□╰)oSuddenly thought of 250) There is an author whose writing is pretty good and I recommend it to you. His name is Shenyue Liren, and the best finished one is "The King of Nets Travels - Yingwu Yuantian". I almost died laughing when I read it! What's commendable is that there is a hint of sadness in it. The heroine is not omnipotent, she is ordinary and can be seen everywhere. Even the readers' book reviews are so well written, with more than 20 long ones and quite a few short ones. Xia Yin actually didn't stay together anymore, hum! If the next part is about the heroine traveling through time and being with Atobe, I can consider forgiving you, otherwise. . . . . . (Why am I so bad every time I write comments to others and my thinking is so confusing? Thinking! Depressed!)

ZERO~Sorry for the tears~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Crying

I want to watch the side story of Shiraishi and Asahi...

Yunqing... My junior high school teacher's name is Yunqing... Male... My classmates call him Yun Qingmei... It's so embarrassing

I finally saw it. . . . Big. . . I left you a message at the hotel. . . Congratulations on the completion. . Hug one. . I finally climbed out of a hole again. . First the long "Wei Wei" and then your pit. . . But it seems that I am about to fall into your trap again. . . Big. . Hehe. . Always support you

Come on, Mua~~ (Hey, the writing is very good!!) Dingding, I like it~!

Even though it's this ending, I still feel resentful... Wuwu~!