Cling to the Boss Lady's Coattails

The great writers all started as novice writers, and the author's writing style is already very good among newcomers, otherwise I wouldn't be able to collect and follow up. It's just that the details are relatively immature. I believe the author will grow into a great master. Come on💪

I don't like short articles. I feel that many plots cannot be developed. There is no need to be like an actor when sculpting characters. A sigh can be used in various routines. When describing characters, you have to see how you want to portray her, and use this model to develop various psychological descriptions! Bless you, after all, there are no natural writers, only hard-working writers!

You are the first of so many writers to receive criticism.

I flipped through it casually, and I think the narrative ability is pretty good. It's just that telling a story is not just about narration. It also needs to add some psychology, tiny movements, expressions, and emotions. Personal opinion

If you don't update, don't always change the article. It will feel like a fake update. The most important thing is that the writing style looks too childish! Like a running account.

The high-ranking sister Zheng is not so easily jealous! Will the past between Sister Zheng and her first wife cannon fodder be written about?

Recently I really like this kind of sweet text with age difference

Think of this street running as sales.

Suddenly I felt that the plot of Zhazha was inexplicably interesting.

Damn it, don't let the scumbag plot be weird and scary. . . Be sweet